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wow I just read this story and all I can say is wow. THis is lovely, I don't mind the lack of smuxs it still so nice to see their relationship grow over time. I look forward to your next update.

God, I love your story. I'm completely enthralled and get so excited when I see it's updated. Please keep it up, and btw, Happy New Year. :)

I LOVE this story.. its so sophisticated and enthralling. The characters are original and its all so well written. The way in which you lead the reader to empathize with such a killer is brilliant. Please continue with it. I am very interested to see how it develops..

i am so in love with this story. the scenes of the missions are outstanding and thoroughly entertaining. i'm amazed by the way boyd works his way through sticky situations and thinks up ruses at the top of his head. and his dry, dead-pan wit is SO funny. a lot of his lines just have me rolling with laughter. i feel so sorry for him now that he feels his emotions awakening- it's a good thing, because no one should be dead to the world, but it must be terrifying as hell. both his and sin's stories are so heart-wrenching. they both have a lot of barriers and defense mechanisms they'll have to work through if they both wish to change, or to reach out to each other.. if boyd's surfacing emotions are as painful to come out as it stands, i wonder what the hell it'll take for sin to open up? it's a remarkable improvement that he's more himself around boyd, but just letting someone touch him sounds like it'll be a huge ordeal.

ryan is wonderful, (i wonder if boyd will feel jealousy toward him later as his care toward sin grows?) and the bickering around the table was awesome. ;)

so yeah, i am hooked, and very obsessed with analyzing these people since you give so much to work with :P and seeing sin and boyd interact is as fascinating as ever, and only gets better every chapter!

Yay, first mission! I like how it was set up.

What an interesting look at our protagonists.

Boyd did very well - and I'm particularly impressed with his knowledge of Sin. That he can expect nothing.

Those stale Goldfish certainly took on a lot of importance.

i've been blown away once again. you certainly do not fail to impress. i'm already getting an itch for spending time to re-read this story because it's so damned riveting. i'm also intrigued because one would assume boyd and sin will have slash scenes, yet they are both SO guarded and removed that i'm pretty curious about what will break those walls down. i like them better and find them even more interesting through every chapter. watching them interact is intense and very entertaining and i cannot wait for more!

I just started reading your story and I wanted to let you know that it is AMAZING. I can't wait to read more.

Amazing story! Really well-written , the technical aspect (grammar and spelling) is perfect, the characters are quite original and interesting and I simply cannot wait for the next update!

ah, the anticipated meeting- it exceeded all my expectations by far. the chemistry between sin and boyd is so enticing. boyd's lack of sadism, a stark contrast to the other agents and authority figures, must really have an impact on sin's take on him. and though there were moments that sin's reaction to boyd's comments (no matter how neutral that always seemed to side with sin in some way) were unknown, i suspect that sin pays fierce attention and sees everything in his new partner. i love your story and think it's so outstanding, and can't wait for the next chapter!