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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!! The plot and the characters works great and the updates aren´t too long (a curse hounting of good fics)
In fact it is so good, that it inspired me to make some art. Now all what I need, is a little bit more accurate description of the characters, since many times I have heard afterwards that the pics I´ve illustrated are nothing like how the authors have imagined them to be...
Here is my gallery, if you like my style and feel that I am good enough to make a fanart of your fic, then please contact me. :)
Oh yeah! One more thing!
Update soon PLZ!!!
In fact it is so good, that it inspired me to make some art. Now all what I need, is a little bit more accurate description of the characters, since many times I have heard afterwards that the pics I´ve illustrated are nothing like how the authors have imagined them to be...
Here is my gallery, if you like my style and feel that I am good enough to make a fanart of your fic, then please contact me. :)
Oh yeah! One more thing!
Update soon PLZ!!!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... Wow. Breathtaking. This is definately the best story I've read on this site in a long time.
Oh, and don't worry about not getting to the slash quickly enough- I love the way the characters are developing slowly, it makes the story all the more touching.
Please update soon! ^_^
Oh, and don't worry about not getting to the slash quickly enough- I love the way the characters are developing slowly, it makes the story all the more touching.
Please update soon! ^_^
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm not really sure where to start or even what to say...other than: This is definately my favourite story on AFF at the moment; it really is amazing. The last few chapters have been just so detailed and really sucked me in. Love the characters and their unique qualities, and seeing Boyd and Sin finally getting close to eachother just makes me feel all..eh...'warm and fuzzy'..yeah. I can't help it! I really feel a lot of emotion towards your characters. So many times I've found myself near tears, laughing or just so angry at some annoying prick that hurts either Sin or Boyd.
Ahhh, I hope the story goes on for awhile, it's too great to stop any time soon. So I hope you both don't ever get too discouraged. You're both very talented authors and have an exceedingly well written story. Personally, I value stories with more plot then porn. And I find that character development is most important and it's just so much more interesting when the lead characters take awhile getting close to eachother, rather then just jumping into bed first chance they get. (That honestly happens way too often in a lot of stories.) No need to rush into the smex, the current flow of tension build-up is perfect imo. It'll be all the better when Boyd and Sin finally do get down to it. ;3
Anywho, really looking forward to future updates. It's safe to say I'm in love with story, as I'm sure many other people are. Hehe. Well, I think that's enough ass-kissing from me tonight, so I'll shut up and save it for the next review. lol
Until next time...
Ahhh, I hope the story goes on for awhile, it's too great to stop any time soon. So I hope you both don't ever get too discouraged. You're both very talented authors and have an exceedingly well written story. Personally, I value stories with more plot then porn. And I find that character development is most important and it's just so much more interesting when the lead characters take awhile getting close to eachother, rather then just jumping into bed first chance they get. (That honestly happens way too often in a lot of stories.) No need to rush into the smex, the current flow of tension build-up is perfect imo. It'll be all the better when Boyd and Sin finally do get down to it. ;3
Anywho, really looking forward to future updates. It's safe to say I'm in love with story, as I'm sure many other people are. Hehe. Well, I think that's enough ass-kissing from me tonight, so I'll shut up and save it for the next review. lol
Until next time...
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! It has complex characters, there is chemistry between Boyd and Sin, and the reader cannot help feeling interested in further developments of their relationships.
You invented really great plot, and I also like the names of the characters - usually if the action is not set nowadays, the authors invent some terrible names that only make the reader laugh, but your names for the characters are appropriate for them.
And there is no need to hurry with writing the smutty parts of the story - the devoted readers of the story will wait for the juicy bits as long as necessary. =)
You invented really great plot, and I also like the names of the characters - usually if the action is not set nowadays, the authors invent some terrible names that only make the reader laugh, but your names for the characters are appropriate for them.
And there is no need to hurry with writing the smutty parts of the story - the devoted readers of the story will wait for the juicy bits as long as necessary. =)
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely - a crack in both of their facades.
I really like the plot and the characters and the oh-so-slowly growing relationship.
Don't get mw wrong - I really do enjoy well-written and realistic slashy smut - but it's so much better when it's involved in a story. (And to be realistic, it must be...)
Very, very well done.
I really like the plot and the characters and the oh-so-slowly growing relationship.
Don't get mw wrong - I really do enjoy well-written and realistic slashy smut - but it's so much better when it's involved in a story. (And to be realistic, it must be...)
Very, very well done.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my favorite chapter yet! i laughed aloud when sin asked, "what is wrong with that child?" and was so happy that boyd gave him a genuine smile. i'm also glad the reviews are of any help at all since you guys deserve a lot of support!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, it is very well written. And well I'm not one for the main characters jumping right into bed. While it has it merits, a story with an actual plot that is worth reading is much funner then just sex. And this story is well worth the read. It's turning out to be one of my favorates.
Thanks again for sharing, and I am looking forward to reading more.
Dark
Thanks again for sharing, and I am looking forward to reading more.
Dark
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story and wait avidly for every update. The style and quality of writing is riveting and I can't get enough. You have a plot, but it's a GOOD plot that is never boring, the lack of sex is ok because your characters are so wonderfully created that if you rushed into sex with them it would ruin the whole thing. If this was a book I would buy it, just so I could read it over and over, anywhere and whenever I wanted! In my opinion this is the best original fic that I have read to date. Keep it up!!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do, oh so truely, love this story. Can't wait for the next update.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I didn't read your story yet, but I'm just letting people know that when they use all those warnings, you can't read them without scrolling the page sideways. It would be nice to just have the major ones and the rest inside so you can check pages without going back and forth. Thank you for not minding me writing this, I wish the site would fix it, but they don't so only the authors can.