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This story's awesome! I yuv the characters the dystopia setting's awesome. The chapters are long, but not enough. I know you have it. When you wrote 300 pages and it's still going, all i could think was that you should keep writing and update more. And 'have my children', a lil bit.

Wow what a great story and I almost didn´t read it....
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Nice chapter! I love the story more and more with each update. You two are doing a great job writing the story. I'm looking forward to next chapter!

Lovely chapter - getting to know you, getting to like you, getting to hope you like me.

Very interesting to see the characters fumbling through their growing feelings for each other.

Thanks for letting us share!

Don't worry aout it beng so long as much as you enjoy writing it Im having just as much fun reading it. this is no my fav. story on the net right now pleace keep up the good work.

Wow... Yet again, I love this story ^_^
Actually, it's starting to remind me of that song from "Beauty and the Beast." XD
I'm a Disney whore, I know. But I was listening to it the other day, and it's really simmilar to Sin and Boyd's situation.I mean,

"Barely even friends
Then somebody bends
Unexpectedly

Just a little change
Small, to say the least
Both a little scared,
Neither one prepared[...]

Bittersweet and strange
Finding you can change
Learning you were wrong..."

Etcetera :p
Anyway, great story ^_^ Update soon :3

i love this story even more with every new installment. it's a great to hear you are having such a fun time writing it and that there's a lot more to come- i'd say at least three quarters of stories on here are abandoned and it's always a dissapointment. i'd go nuts if yours ended because i'm dying to see what happens. ;) the dialogue is just so priceless- the one line that just got me was "excuse me, my hand slipped." rofl! and boyd and sin shopping together? absolutely endearing!! hope sin's mission goes alright. fantastic chapter!

>insert happy sigh here<

First off, I got all excited because there was an update, and the chapter itself just made me even happier, definately worth the wait. ;) I really do admire the way you two write, it inspires so many damn emotions. I was seriously getting peeved when that jerk was harrassing Sin. I almost started bitch-slapping my computer in an attempt to relieve my anger. *cough*

Ehehe, but I soon got over that because, I found some parts quite amusing. Had a laugh a few times from lines such as: '"And you are bringing me to a lingerie shop." Sin looked over at him innocently. "Are you trying to tell me something?"' Ye, that was good. What am I saying? The whole thing was good! It was also so sweet at times, at least imo. There doesn't have to be cuddling for things to be cute; just seeing Boyd and Sin being friendly and happy around each other is enough to make me feel fuzzy. X3

So yeah, along with me saying 'awww' a few times, I probably had a pervy smile on. I can't help it, the interaction is hawt. lol Mmm, so no complaints from me, carry on with the great work I say. Slow and steady. And to hear you have 500 - 600 pages with no end in sight is awesome, this is the type of story you just don't want to see end!

Ah, what else? Oh, not sure if anything is going to happen, but I feel a bit uneasy about Sin going on his solo mission; I feel like something bad is going to happen. *looks side to side* Guess I'll just have to wait and see. Of course, even if nothing happens 'this time', something will for sure in the future. >8D *evil cackle*

Anywho, once again, I'm eagerly awaiting the next update. Need more Sin and Boyd bonding! More mission mishaps! More agency dilemmas! More sweet cheeks nicknames! Phew, I've turned into a very needy person. ;D

*grin* Until next time...

Truly my favorite story I've ever read here. Hope you update soon!

Very,very cool story. One darn good original.keep it up!