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This story is really great. It took me two days to read. Luckily I was sick and didn't have to go into work the next day anyway. (yeah luckily..werid huh) i can't wait till Boyd gets a clue and he and Hsin get it on. Well Ryan is official nuts. Poor kid has been deprived of the suns nutrients and the deficency has gone to his head.

Since I didn't commnent back then I will comment now on Boyds french tryist (sp). I saw everyone's shock and Boyds embarssment coming a mile a way and I was laughing too. I feel bad for him but damn that was funny. It was so obvious that he didn't NEED to sleep with the other guy and that he could get the information without whoring. Especially if he had kept Hsin around. It was nearly like he didn't even try to get any information. All they had to go on was the disk when he could have asked some questions and maybe get some solid leads...

and I always wonder if Boyd will ever take into account that Hsin sounded damn jealous that night and jealousy doesn't come from disgust (even though that emotion was there too).

So is Boyd ever going to find out the answer to Hsin's question: Do you even know why you're here?

What is the answer to that question? Is Boyd going to find out? It seems to be...to destroy all the good people trying to make this shit whole of a planet good for the masses rather than for the few an rich. So when are these guys to to blow up the angency and switch sides.

I also hope Ryan gets seduced and laid by some cute guy who is NOT Boyd or Hsin. It would be fun him being so meek, naive, and kind of mousey cute and all.

THis is a monster of a fic. But I must be obstinate and declare MORE. :)

I also wish Boyd and Hsin would just switch sides, I hate the agency. Those guys don't belong there.

Poor Boyd... Dumped by Ryan and still to scared to visit Hsin...

(Betting he'd be welcome.)

I created an account just to be the 100th reviewer (not that making the account took all that much effort). Either way, just wanted to say that I really do like this story. Actually read most of it all in one sitting. Please keep up the hard work!

PS. Apparently you were former Gundam fiction writers? Just wondering if there are links to those works of yours. Thank you both very much.

Hee hee I liked the phone conversation! Gah I love this story!!!! So do you guys update once a week, or just whenever the next chapter's done? Either way I can't WAIT for more, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

I see the story is in some kind of calmer phase, before storm?

Hmm, maybe. Maybe not.

I think Ryan's good for Boyd simply because he can obviously be trusted and he's so kind and genuine. As a character he's not too interesting, but Boyd needs someone like him in his life. So I'm glad he's there. Memories of Lou make a painful read, and I forgot to mention earlier that I cried ALOT while reading the chapter where he was murdered. I was a bit traumatized by it I think.

I adore those phone calls from Sin. He's obviously hinting and flirting a lot, he must have had some brilliant time with the GAY book. So, you go baby, read some more (I know you want to)!

Cute chapter! Ryan is such a nice guy, I can't help smiling every time I read about him =) It is interesting to read about Boyd's thoughts on his situation with Sin, I'm curious as to what Sin feels about Boyd. It's great that they are so friendly with each other =), but it probably will spoil their relationships if they try to get closer to each other..

Can't wait for the next chapter! =)

I'm not sure how to describe this chapter, rather than cute and kind of sad. Ryan and Boyd make good friends, though I was laughing at Boyd the whole time for not really getting the whole date thing. Of course it's sad how many memories were brought up with Lou. Can't wait to see the next chapter and hopefully some more Sin/Boyd interaction ^^.

Awesome as usual. Can't wait for more. I suppose I will now mosey on over to the new site and make more fangirlish comments. Toodles.

wow, I just read the entire story over two days and I loved it. Riveting from start to finish and beautifully written.