rate_review Reviews

oh yeah, i meant hsin/boyd = love (stupid aff doesn't allow the hearts emoticon to show up). anyways, your historical facts and etc. are also well thoughtout and well researched; major kudos! I'm glad you guys aren't half-assing your way through a story like most authors do. It's so hard these days to find a genuinely good piece of fiction. you guys make my day. seriously.

This chapter was a bit shorter than the usual ones, wasn't it? But it was cool anyway! I love the way the guys flirt with each other, and the new assignement makes it 100% sure that they will finally get on with their relationship. I was really sorry about all those things they have to go through to get those secret identities, particularly the fact that Sin has to smoke (don't like smokers). I hope he will be able to quit once the job is done.

But they will have to leave, and that means no more Ryan in the story... Not good, he is my favourite character. I wish I could be transported into that fictional universe. I could be Agent Ultra or something. I'd make him reconsider his opinion about his sexuality =DD

Back to the serious part of review - Carthart seems to be pretty interested in Boyd's mama, is there going to be some development in this interest? But Vivienne is such a cold-hearted bitch she wouldn't accept anything like relationships at work..

I'm really loooking forward to the next chapter. I wish you could update the story every day!!

They're going to be living together? I'm excited. I wish you'd update more than once a week...stupid real life interfering with my need for slash. Anywho, as always, I can't wait!

Shit, they'll be living together for almost a year?? Ah, sweetness! :D I am interested in seeing how Hsin manages the whole cover thing, and living among civilians. I have a feeling he'll learn a lot during the next months. And he has Boyd there holding his hand when he feels all lost, awww. And it's also interesting how nervous Hsin is about the whole living arrangements, it's cute as hell. He's a human being with feelings, not a monster or a machine.

And, I gotta say one more thing. Is it wrong that I find Hsin's jealousy of Boyd extremely sexy? I mean, all that madness in France while drunk was not so nice, but seeing it in small signs, like now the interaction with Ryan... I'm a sucker for stuff like this. It's hot. And the way he's still trying to think of it as just something a friend might feel for a friend. Hah. Although Hsin needs a friend too, not just a lover. To think he's never had one before, it's extremely sad.

Thank you for the update! I'm glad to know we still have a long way to go!

Well, I love this story and I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Why was the chapter so short???-kidding)
I like Boyd and Sin flirting with eachother....
I can´t wait to read about them living together!!! huhhuhh yeayaa that will be funny!!! Home Sweet Home....
You know when a ´couple´ starts to live together, that´s a very important moment, so you should consider to post 2 chapters next time !!!(on monday) (when it helps to post a chapter faster I would consider begging on my knees but I´m not sure... ;).......so would you???? ;)

I second everything the person right before me said.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the great work.

Yay! They're going to live together :D

I found your story on a reccomendation site, and I'm so glad I opened it up. The characters feel so real and the emotional issues they have are extremely fun (and kind of nervewrecking) to read through (although I admit that at some moments I did just want to scream "Shut up and make out already!"). The missions are pretty fun to read, too. I don't see well written action scenes in online fiction often, and this has been a nice breath of fresh air. I'm definitely going to keep up with this story. Thank you so much for writing and posting it.

Hello just wanted to let you know I really loved your story. Chapter 14 broke my heart...
Thank you:-)

WOW!

I discovered this story Sunday afternoon. I wasn't able to stop reading. I barely slept trying to read as much as possible as soon as possible.
*LOL* I think my boss hates you now... well... he would hate you, if he knew why my zombie-like state.

I finally put myself up to date this morning. ^___^ Tonight I'll get some sleep!!

*bows* Thanks a lot for the wonderful story.