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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A nightclub? Sin's gonna have trouble not killing somebody - but I have faith in him xD Or at least, Boyd. Of course the ending was both sweet and sad. Awesome fanart too by the way.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I loved this story from the beginning and I will continue to love until the end. Its been awhile since my last review but I been keeping up with chapters and finding myself more addicted to the story as it progresses. I love the way that Boyd and Sin relationship is developing, although I wish there were more boy's love smut moments between them, I love how intimate they are with each other, without realizing it. I feel that they could honestly, be soul-mates, they have so much in common and they seem to complete each other. I hope the next chapter, will have a kiss between them or at least more moments, of them sleeping together. Hopefully when Boyd sleeps with Sin, it will keep the nightmares away and bring them closer together.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the tension between them is amazing! But they're so adorable together! Nice transformations by the way! Despite what they think, their disguises are sexy ^^
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story and with every chapter is getting even more interesting. I really enjoy the detailed construction of world and characters, and it's always good when the plot is more and more dynamic.Best regards for authors!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This one had me worried for a while. The argument over the plates was hilarious. Very well done. But then it escalated and I was worried this chapter was going to end badly. The gummy bears were perfect. So completely Sin. So much love for this story (as always) and I can't wait to read more (also as always).
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was probably my favorite chapter so far, quite a ride emotionally. It started as funny with the bus journey but the mood soon changed. The tension between those two was incredible, the way it was built up into this massive argument was very, very interesting. Sin and Boyd both have a lot of insecurities, so it's great they are finally attempting to have a serious conversation. Sin is one of the most interesting characters I've met in any story I've ever read, so I can't wait until he opens up more and more, there were some signs in this chapter we won't have to wait too long. Guns and gummy bears, hah that was definitely very "Sin". And bying the present, very awwwish. Boyd should show that he appreciates Sin with some kind of gesture aswell. And I have to wonder, what will those other ways making Sin more agreeable be? Was Sin hinting at something? Or maybe I read too much into it. *grins*
Awesome work, thank you!
Awesome work, thank you!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah, i have been on a hiatus. but i've caught up and am continuously excited about the story!
i felt so shitty for boyd and sin when they went back to their nasty bickering, so it was a huge relief they could finally spit out what they feel and get on with it. funny how arguing is so cathartic for certain people. ;) it's so amusing to see boyd consumed with attraction for sin and not able to hide it. god, i can't even wrap my mind around the excessive awkwardness that could arise due to their living situation. needless to say, i can't wait.
btw it breaks my hurt to hear you mentioning the end of the story. it's a joke, right? obviously you've got another one hundred chapters left in you-- at least! :P and then you're coming back for several sequels, right? do i have to beg? 'cause i will. ;)
i felt so shitty for boyd and sin when they went back to their nasty bickering, so it was a huge relief they could finally spit out what they feel and get on with it. funny how arguing is so cathartic for certain people. ;) it's so amusing to see boyd consumed with attraction for sin and not able to hide it. god, i can't even wrap my mind around the excessive awkwardness that could arise due to their living situation. needless to say, i can't wait.
btw it breaks my hurt to hear you mentioning the end of the story. it's a joke, right? obviously you've got another one hundred chapters left in you-- at least! :P and then you're coming back for several sequels, right? do i have to beg? 'cause i will. ;)
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this new chapter!!! It is one of my favourite chapters in the story so far.
It's nice to read that the guys finally see that nobody is a clairvoyant, and they have to talk to understand what they feel. Their argument was frightening in a way - they both usually have such self-control, and they suddenly lose it - I thought someone was going to get killed. But it's good they sorted it out as grown-ups. Sin's peace offering was really touching - gummy bears =D All I could think about the whole post-argument talk was: Sweeeeeeet!!
And the bus scene was funny - it got me laughing out loud. Sexy bastard =DDD
I'm looking forward to next chapter! You are doing a wonderful job with the story, and it is one of the best fics I've ever read.
It's nice to read that the guys finally see that nobody is a clairvoyant, and they have to talk to understand what they feel. Their argument was frightening in a way - they both usually have such self-control, and they suddenly lose it - I thought someone was going to get killed. But it's good they sorted it out as grown-ups. Sin's peace offering was really touching - gummy bears =D All I could think about the whole post-argument talk was: Sweeeeeeet!!
And the bus scene was funny - it got me laughing out loud. Sexy bastard =DDD
I'm looking forward to next chapter! You are doing a wonderful job with the story, and it is one of the best fics I've ever read.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And... the new chapter. Whoot.
Ever since they stopped showing Heroes, THIS is what motivates me during the week.
Loved the chapter as usual and glad to see that they can fight and they can get over it so quickly too.
Thank you as usual
Ever since they stopped showing Heroes, THIS is what motivates me during the week.
Loved the chapter as usual and glad to see that they can fight and they can get over it so quickly too.
Thank you as usual
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. ahhh, it's such a good story! i can't even express how much i love this story. first off, it's the most intricate, well-written, and eloquent plot/storyline i have ever run across in original writing. the characters are just to die for! Hsin and Boyd are so complex, so flawed, so human. Hsin is such a sympathetic character, but at the same time I just wanna squeal over how cute he can be. His sarcasm, his bloodlust, his whole demeanor, it's all so fitting. As for Boyd, wow. I wanna smack him for being such a tease without realizing it, but at the same I wanna hug him because his mother is such a self-serving bitch (then again, she's a working woman, so it's understandable). I love how you guys are taking it slow with the romance, after all, in real life people just don't fall in love right away. Those emotions always take time. Fictions that rushes the romance to get to the sex are always off-putting, So good job on taking it slow! Reiterating on what I said before, this is such a fantastic story. I swear, you guys should make it into a book, I would buy it in a heartbeat.
ps. sorry my review is so long. =P
pps. hsin/boyd = <33
ps. sorry my review is so long. =P
pps. hsin/boyd = <33