rate_review Reviews

The story is getting better and better! This chapter was really interesting - all the terrible events in Sin's past made me sad, but it is good that he feels able to talk about some of them now. And Boyd has turned into a normal guy instead of the unemotional person he used to be.

There is sexual tension in the story - Sin walking around naked and Boyd drooling at the sight of Sin's sexy tattoos =DD I am really looking forward the moment they realize their mutual interest. The ending was really sweet!!

And the fanart is very nice! I wish I could draw - that would be a good way to show how much I love your story!

YAY!! I'm FINALLY reviewing...(i get a cookie for this right??) lol
It was a great chapter, really charged. Of all the previous chapters i think i loved this the best because Hsin finally actually seems 'human' in a normal...-ish way. And you finally got Boyd to open up, or actually open up more rather than just have an internal dialogue..ish thing. (sorry im not that eloquent with words... :-D)
catch ya all on the flip side hehe
~Jay~

You know what would be awesome? If you updated more than once a week. :P I'm like, an addict or something equally as ridiculous. But it's nice to see them acting so comfortably around each other. I hope it continues. As always, can't wait for the next update.

this story is so great. every time theres a new chapter i get so excited. like imagine how you get when you hear a cds coming out you want( for example: linkin park -minutes to midnight may 15.) or a new book coming out that you really want( for example: harry potter 7). and hearing your making a book 2, its so wonderful, its like getting braces off your teeth for the first, cause you just cant stop smiling cuz your so happy..
anyways...this story has all the goods to be good and is good.
sin and boyd living together is so goodiness cause their going to get closer and closer to each other.
and sins telling of his past, giant leap to their closerness! yay.
sleeping in a bed together. shoot. their relationship has just jumped to the moon. their in love!
having boyd rescue sin emotionally...LOVE.

I've been keeping up with this story since chapter... thirteen I think, and it just keeps getting better. Do you think you might publish it after it's finished? I know for a fact that I'd buy a copy and I have no doubt others would too. I'm always sad when authors of good stories take their accounts down and I would love a hard-copy of this to keep on my shelf. I would give you constructive critisism, but I honestly can't think of any, your grammar and spelling are wondeful and there aren't any plotholes or over-used cliches. Keep up the good work! Oh, this reminds me, another really well written piece is a story called The Godeaters, by Jesse Hajicek, just in case you haven't heard of it. I haven't got a link for it at the moment, but if you type it in on Google, you're sure to find it easily, it's a great read.

CUDDLING?!?!? no. no friggin way. But, my gosh, I ain't complaining, not in a million years. So glad that they've FINALLY showed some obvious signs of affection.

Just as equally excited to know that you have a sequal planned out. ALREADY!
Whoot! This story rocks my socks.

I actually ended up jumping around in my apartment squealing a little bit when I saw an update. I know they keep coming regularly but the effect is always the same haha! I'm insaaane.

Ok, first of all, that Jess lady better not to try and make any sexual harassment attempts on our poor Hsin. However, Hsin working at a club should be interesting, crowds and crowds of people he must interact with. I'm actually eagerly waiting for him to gain some trust on other people aswell, I wonder if that's possible or if it's gonna end up badly.

About Boyd... I have had this picture of him in my mind from the start, exactly how he looks like. And somehow I keep adding more and more colours on him, it's like his transformation from an unemotional introvert to this more affectionate and playful character shows in his colours. Er, that probably doesn't makes any sense to anyone else but me. He's more and more beautiful as time passes.

I wonder if Hsin is ever going to talk about the sexual harassment part in his past, and about his mother. Obviously he's not ready for that just yet. The scene on the bed.. Heavens, it was sad but wonderful at the same time. Sad for obvious reasons and wonderful because it gave a relief (even if it was a small one) to Hsin. How long is he gonna defend his father for his actions? That's an interesting psychological phenomenon right there.

Until next time. Cookies and lots of love to our writers! <3

Err, of course I meant sexual abuse when it comes to Hsin's past. Not just harassment. Sorry, english's not my mother language.

...awww...that was so beautiful and cute. Cuteness on super high level.

that was the cutest chapter ending i've ever read. i love the gradual learning of sin's past and the building of trust. arrg one update is never enough! :)