rate_review Reviews

Loved the chapter (as usual)! Nice to see that the guys learn to live normal life, but I wonder if they will not lose all their skills during this peaceful time so they won't be able to do the actual mission... And the way the guys flirt with each other makes me smile. =))

I'm kind of sorry for Jess - it is obvious that her life wasn't roses, and now she feels attracted to Sin, who is 'not available'.

Looking forward to next update!!

Get well, Sonny, and many happy returns, Ais!

i've been reading your story for a while, and i felt horrible when i realized that i hadn't reviewed at all! i'm usually so much better about reviewing! anyway, our story is up in the top 3 stories i have ever read on the internet. its for stories like yours, i decided, that internet sites like this were invented, because publishing companies are dicks and wouldn't publish them but they're sooooooooo good! i love our characters and find it very impressive that you ceated such believable characters in such a unique setting. its very rare that a story has both interesting characters and an interesting setting. anyway, i love it!!!! can't wait for the next update!!!

arg, this jess woman is up to no good.
crap . i hope boyd does somehting about this jess.
cat fight? poison... sin is boyds man!

man, the finger sucking, completly unlike the shy sin, ... this new sin is very favorable.
boyd cooking, hilarious, i used to be the same way!
preheatig. wtf!
browning. its already brown!
great

LMAO. Boyd... and his ultimate nemisis: The Cookbook! My gosh, I can't stop laughing.
Can't wait for more.

Interesting, interesting. So much could happen, I can only imagine :)

I can so relate to Boyd with my cooking non-skills. But it is funny how he can easily do complicated problem solving in their assignments but can't cook. Hmm. I blame those cookbooks!

Hsin laughing for the first time, I noticed I was just as mesmerized as Boyd! See that is why building up the characters slowly is THE way to go (hint for some other writers), these kind of lovely things you notice, and how you can live and feel with the characters. Like noticing small things that are so satisfying.

Our boys are getting a bit horny aren't they? Finger blow jobs... Must be the weather or something (I'm not complaining)... Are we going to see some heterosexual action soon? I really don't know what to think of Jess. Getting desperate like that is not a tendency I appreciate too much. Get a hold of yourself woman! Although I'm not going to demonize her because that happens too often in slash when it comes to women. So, we'll see if Hsin actually develops an interest in boobies!

I hope the birthday was fun and both our writers are doing ok!

Oh... this story has all my attention right now. It`s so well written and .. well.. alluring ^^ I start to live Sin`s and Boyd`s lifes, as if they`re real people - which I think is the best compliment the writer can get, when the characters seems so REAL... I can`t wait for the update *lives from Saturday to Saturday*
Erm... please, I beg You *goes on her knees* don`t make a sex scene with Jess, please! *whimpers* I just, um, read slash, because, well, there`s no het, and it might kill me to see het in my fav story *stares blankly* I mean, I don`t want to tell You what to do, (I`d never!), just - no women, PLEASE! *smiles bashfully* Man, I`m so childish...
Hope You`re better Sonny and Happy Birthday Ais
You rock!

He laughed! Yay! That was good........ but i want them to at LEAST make out soon or i may have to threaten you with a spork.... fear the wrath of my spork! =P

Thank you for updating! as alweys a wonderfull read!! your writing style is awsem! ^^

AHHHHHH! I was so excited when I saw that you guys updated. Can I tell you guys a secret? I'm so infatuated with your story that I find every other original story I have read after to be bland, redundant, and complete crap. Honestly, where do you guys get this talent from? This story is so unbelievable. The plot, the dialogue, the character development, everything!! Amazing. And the sexual tension! Ahh, the sexual tension. It's so palpable. I love how you guys are making it so realistic by having them flirt, angst, and flirt some more. I'm glad you guys are actually developing a plot instead of jumping into sex right away. Porn disguised as stories really annoy the crap out of me. Forreals. So good job and continute to write!




(If you make this into a book I would so buy it!)




much love,
lissy doll