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Yay, I'm glad that they finally got somewhere - but as one set of problems are hurtled, new ones arise. Awesome chapter guys.

Finely!!! things are moving forward! I'm soo looking forward to reading the next chap.. and whats with Boyds tatoos??? ^^ pleas update soon!

That was probably the sexiest chapter in any story I have ever read. Just WOW. I only wish Boyd would have known Hsin is really inexperienced in that area right from the start so Hsin's confused reaction after the bj would have made more sense to him. First time sex can be a really emotional experience. It's true you might now know how to act etc after it, it can be really akward. So, as others have stated, the way you wrote the whole thing was so real, but of course I wouldn't expect any less from you. I knew you would succeed!

I hadn't actually thought a lot about Boyd's habit of not telling pretty much anything about himself and his past.. but it is true. Hsin is actually giving a lot of himself in these new discoveries even though it's far from easy to him, but Boyd is not as much. But I hope Hsin won't start acting too distant, helping Boyd to open up a little bit. Boyd is so reserved (well, not when he's on his knees in the kitchen floor though *cough*) both emotionally and physically. Hsin hoping they could have showered together was so cute, but hey, maybe one day?

So, the ending left me a bit sad, but hopeful for their future. And I liked how you ended the chapter, not all mushy you know, Hsin going to his own bed. I hope the roughness stays with Hsin and Boyd.

Thank you so much for giving us the pleasure to read the story. And I'm gonna check the new fanart. :)

The chapter was simply incredibly hot! I expected that the guys will finally act on their desires, but I never thought the result would be such a sexy chapter.

It's great that Sin and Boyd are getting more comfortable with each other, it looks like the story is moving towards 'happily ever after', and nothing bad will happen now. I like the fact that their attitude towards each other is more mature - they are not simply annoyed if something doesn't happen the way they planned, but they try to actually solve the problems by talking to each other.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

ah! this chapter was just mind-blowing. boyd was absolutely wicked to tease sin that way, but apparently it worked very well. ;) i loved the way you wrote about them exploring each other and it all seemed exactly like it would be under their circumstances- uncertain, frenzied, uncoordinated, passionate, etc. whereas SO many sex scenes on this site, or any site rather, are all, "let's get down to business!" and everyone knows what they're doing and none of it is awkward, which never really happens in reality. but the realism in your scenes makes it sexier and far more interesting because there is so much going on beneath the surface at any given time.

it's so wonderful and heartwarming they're talking now, that they can manage it between make-out and groping sessions even, haha, and i just hope boyd will do well with being more communicative, it is distressing how shell-shocked he is. and his tattoos are really disturbing. i hope sin will help him become more comfortable in his skin, and his scars are probably not nearly as bad as he thinks. it is sad he so easily accepts sin's scars and finds him unconditionally beautiful but has about the total opposite view for himself.

i'm still intrigued by what he saw in julieta's earlier and hope he doesn't get into any trouble. i meant to mention that last time but my reviews have been too short and crappy lately. and thanks again for updating so regularly, it is a high note for my saturdays. :)

EEK! You make us happy. You know that don't you? The Both of you. Sin finally let go, to a certain degree, and now it sounds like it's Boyd who's going to go through some changes/ self-realizations.

Loved the chapter!

This is truly an amazing story. The societal setting, the characters, the plot; everything fits, is well thought out and so incredibly well written. Truly amazing work. My compliments to both of you.

I have been following your story eagerly for some time, so it's time I tell you how much I enjoy it! much more complex than most stories, and very well written, great characters... thank you for the time you spend writing because I am having a great time reading it. Looking forward to the next chapter like everyone else...

Yes! Ok i was waiting for this for forever! Mwahahahahahaaha now in the next chapter Boyd must do something! Preferably like what he did in the club only in the apartment so that his behaviour and actions can lead to all sorts of fun things. =D

Sorry, guys, there is no way I could write a coherent review after such a ***hot*** chapter! It's great that Boyd finally finds out that Sin wants him - that will encourage him to do something about the situation.

I still feel sorry about Jess, but at least she was nice towards Sin - other women would be angry or hysterical in such a situation.

I can't wait for the next chapter - what are the guys going to do about their feelings towards each other?