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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh how i've missed this so. but it was well worth the wait. honestly, i think it's better to take your time. quality is all that matters and you guys rock. i love the speed at which their relationship is progressing. everything is just perfect. i'll be looking foward to reading more... as always.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crazy good story. Crazy good chapter. Crazy good writing. Will forever be one of my favorite stories.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, this means there is THE shower scene to wait for, yessssssss. Ok, maybe a bit shallow to start the review saying that, but come on. SHOWER. Nuff said.
I have my own suspicions about what might have happened between Hsin and his father but most likely I'm wrong so I won't say it. In some weird way I enjoy the stand offish side of his personality tremendously, hey it makes an interesting read. The way he just grabbed Boyd to bed would have been very hot but sex + emotional pain = not a good idea.
I value Boyd's determination to form his agonizing past in words so much, the way he just didn't give up when the first attempt went badly. I think I got somehow closer to Boyd with this chapter, I'm glad you took your time describing him opening up. It was so nice, really. The atmosphere in the forest, them sitting there together, becoming closer with every word said.. I could just feel it. It was an important chapter, an important development. It's like their relationship is in balance now. Why would Boyd think Hsin's is going to judge his past indeed... Reading about Lou is still painful, I mentioned before I cried like a little child reading the scene of him getting murdered. You just gotta thank him for having been there for Boyd. Maybe one thing I was left craving for was Boyd really thanking Hsin for what he did for Jared. Torturing and killing might be fucked up but the bastard deserved it, eye for an eye.
Hey, when the quality of writing is this high it's totally understandable it's bye bye for weekly updates. So take your time! <3 Ciao.
I have my own suspicions about what might have happened between Hsin and his father but most likely I'm wrong so I won't say it. In some weird way I enjoy the stand offish side of his personality tremendously, hey it makes an interesting read. The way he just grabbed Boyd to bed would have been very hot but sex + emotional pain = not a good idea.
I value Boyd's determination to form his agonizing past in words so much, the way he just didn't give up when the first attempt went badly. I think I got somehow closer to Boyd with this chapter, I'm glad you took your time describing him opening up. It was so nice, really. The atmosphere in the forest, them sitting there together, becoming closer with every word said.. I could just feel it. It was an important chapter, an important development. It's like their relationship is in balance now. Why would Boyd think Hsin's is going to judge his past indeed... Reading about Lou is still painful, I mentioned before I cried like a little child reading the scene of him getting murdered. You just gotta thank him for having been there for Boyd. Maybe one thing I was left craving for was Boyd really thanking Hsin for what he did for Jared. Torturing and killing might be fucked up but the bastard deserved it, eye for an eye.
Hey, when the quality of writing is this high it's totally understandable it's bye bye for weekly updates. So take your time! <3 Ciao.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I forgot to mention. Boyd HAS to stop blaming himself for what happened to Lou. I agree with Hsin, it's absolutely ridiculous.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sweet. It suxers that updates won't be as regular, but they are well worth the wait. I'm glad we got more insight on Lou and Boyd's scars.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a great chapter!! It almost made me cry - all the things about Boyd's past are so sad.. And Sin's life wasn't any better. I really feel sorry for them.
On the other hand, now they have each other, so it's all good. Ans Sin even has a fanclub of 17 crazy girls =))
I'll wait impatiently for the next chapter - I guess it will contain a shower scene... ;))
On the other hand, now they have each other, so it's all good. Ans Sin even has a fanclub of 17 crazy girls =))
I'll wait impatiently for the next chapter - I guess it will contain a shower scene... ;))
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is bookmarked and checked dilligently each day for an update.The longest story that I have read and I haven't gotten impatient for smut. lol I think I would avidly read a grocery list written by you two. In other words you got me hooked!
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAYYY you updated!! fucking bitch!! (Boyds mother) sin is a perv. ^^ And i can't wait till the next chapter!! (you made my week!!)
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And finally! boyd releaves his chest. LOL Sin's first thought is: "does that mean we can shower together now?"
Loved it.
Loved it.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incongruity was pure bliss.
i have never read a fist-intimate-scene that seemed to real and not fake. congrats.
some parts got me upset, concerning boyd. this story has such strong emotions put into words...
cant wait for boyd to stop hiding his scars.
you guys are amazing. this story is art to me. do you guys realize that your making art.
i have never read a fist-intimate-scene that seemed to real and not fake. congrats.
some parts got me upset, concerning boyd. this story has such strong emotions put into words...
cant wait for boyd to stop hiding his scars.
you guys are amazing. this story is art to me. do you guys realize that your making art.