rate_review Reviews

That was really fast, how do you manage to write a whole chapter so quickly??

Now I'm really curious about who is that mysterious man. I thought there will be some Agency people watching them to make sure they dont do anything wrong, and I expected the Agency people to catch Boyd and Sin in flagrante delicto, so to say, and then there would be a scandal or something, but it turns out I was wrong.

Now I have all kinds of guesses about that man - he is that guy from the Agency who disappeared years ago and now is fighting the government, or perhaps he is in fact Sin's father, and it was a mistake that everyone considered him dead... I can't wait to read what happens next.

The sex scene was totally hot, Sin is such a dominant person, I almost expected he would bring out the whip and handcuffs. =)

BTW, why are there less chapters on your website than here? Which is the better version of the story then - here or on your website?

And I guess I'll have to register on that forum of yours - I will do multiple votes for Ryan! =)

Whoo, someone is going to cause trouble for the two.

Oooh a mystery man... It's good they must concentrate on their job a bit more again, none of us wants their skills to go waste I reckon. And the sex was even hotter than last time, unbelievably hot! *wanks*

And somehow I feel sad this book is coming to an end, but I'm glad there's still more to come afterwards. I don't want this story to end ever ever EVER!

I thought there will be no new chapter this month since now you post as you write, and I'm really glad I was wrong!

The chapter was great as ever, it is interesting to find out more about Sin's and Boyd's background. It was a really sexy chapter, even though there was no shower scene =)

And it get's really interesting now - is there really someone following them? And why exactly did Boyd's mother get married with his father if they are such different people?

I'm waiting for the next chapter!!

wow... that was a fast update. this story makes me so happy... it really really does...

AH! this chapter was so perfecto!
and the last sentecnce....ended it jsut right! i mean you hit the spot!
BUT you hit the target with each chapter fyi.
their all soooooooooooo wonderful.
so, boyds and sins first time...i dont know what i was expecting, but what you wrote was perfect!ammmmmazing!
and boyds slutish teasing mannerisms are sooooooooooo adorable! and sin calling boyd a bitch, ha, that was a crack up.!
and boyds minds blowing orgasm!ha, that was soom serious hot shit...
and, im starting to suspect its that other top level assissin that boyd has been feeling like someone is watching him.....hmmmmmmmmm.wondering....
are we ever going to get ot meet this other top assissin character? ...if so is he going to be like a villain?or not important at all....he keeps coming up in the story so im wondering.... will he come up in this book or in the sequel. .... and , how long will this book be , are you in the middle or almost finished with this book? do you have an estimate on chapters for this book?
and sin thinking typical male thoughts now, haha, like competion! and asking boyd if he was better than therry, classic!
and dont get me started, but im completly happy that bodys so much more comfortable now in exposing his body!
and question...they better clean up that couch after their activities on it..right?
and i love boyd taking sin out to do normal things...do more of that ....sin has missed out on so much because his childhood.
and i can feel that your building something up with this mysterious business that boyds been investigating!...wondering wondering..
waiting and hoping for a quick new chapter!
question....will there be any boyd sketching sin in the future? corny i know, but cheesily romantic to me!
..........and stupid question...but are they keeping up with hair dying their roots and stuff. ahhhh, why am i asking........i dunno.
so, sins past flashbacks are disturbing......and they are visually stunningly creepy how you write about them...especially about the moon and the bloody field of green grass.awesome job dudes!
anyways..............when you were talking about hollywood and the movies, there was one spelling error, it was in the beginning of a paragraph, you spelled 'bollywood.' instead of hollywood.
anyways, other than that it was perfecto!
and fyi, this is my favorite story on aff!!
so...............you reminded me in this chapter how bad the planet was, good for that reminder because i had gone off with ya know jsut wanting boyd and cin to get it on. but bringing the environment back up was a good thing.a reminder of human action and the consequences.
anyways,.... you always put heart to heart talks of sin and boyd conversing....and those always make the story so much more real and worth reading.
theres alot i can say about this story but i cant put it in words.. and im tired. so good night and thanks for the chap.

An update. AN UPDATE? And a long one too. Holy hell, I so wasn't expecting this yet. Made me so very happy though!

I really enjoyed reading about Sin in ordinary, every day life settings, eating at a restaurant, watching a movie (good choice!), just doing things for the sake of it. Or a bit for Boyd's sake. Did he really say "whatever makes you happy" or was I imagining? He's turned out to be such a well-behaved, charming young man, that Sin. Who would have guessed huh?

Note to self: DO NOT ENTER A CANDY SHOP WITH SIN. TOO EXPENSIVE.

And the talk about their bosses, their morals vs loyalty, was truly interesting. I still dislike many aspects about their views on these things, like the need to just be loyal and not think, but hey. Still love them.

"What's fisting?" made me burst out laughing.

Boyd IS such a whore isn't he. I kinda like it aswell. The sex was hot, and I gotta tell you I'm glad their first time wasn't all lovey dovey, but rough. I've learned to prefer it that way in stories, and hey it's not like Sin and Boyd are head over heels in love yet is it? I'm glad it happens slowly, develops into much stronger emotional base. And even though Sin calls Boyd his bitch I don't see Boyd as girly (although he does have good conversational skills, although that's not necessarily a female thing), which is good. I'm so sick of reading about overly girly boys in some other stories.

And we finally hear about Sin's mom and the sexual abuse. Very sad, very unfortunate. Was pretty much as I had expected though. And my suspicions about Emilio's death are here again. Who was strong enough to kill him indeed... and "The memories were no longer assaulting him; he no longer saw ashen skin and blank, staring green eyes." HMMM. The after-sex conversation was very informative indeed.

Anyway, I hope they actually do arrange the rent payment in this glorious way, har har.

Thank you, fucking loved the chapter. (insert BIG heart here)

Wow, I loved how blunt Boyd was when he first brought up the topic of intercourse - and Sin's 'fisting' question was so curious and innocent that I blushed. Of course the actual intercourse was amazing and I'm glad Sin didn't freak out, especially now that we know his past. Awesome job you guys .. With such delicate situations at hand (the rape, brothel, and even Theirry), the chapter was executed realistically and not at all on the pretense of being just smut. I loved how hestitant Sin was at first, and how steamily he ended up at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to read the next chapter :D

Hahahaha sin is so childish. Him and his candy. ^^ Really hot lemon thought.

Who knew Sin could be such a pervert. And such an open, blatant pervert at that (well... when he's alone with Boyd). And Boyd! You LIKE being called a whore!?!?

dizzying character developement!