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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yessssssssss!!!! I demanded more yesterday and now you have more, yay! I'm loving the speed of your updates.
I'm a bit surprised about Boyd's attitude when he said Sin deserved to die after he fucked up the plan but I suppose his just jealous. Speaking of which I think it would be amusing to see more of his jealousy and whether he will be vocal about it.
Great job and keep it up... until the next update!
I'm a bit surprised about Boyd's attitude when he said Sin deserved to die after he fucked up the plan but I suppose his just jealous. Speaking of which I think it would be amusing to see more of his jealousy and whether he will be vocal about it.
Great job and keep it up... until the next update!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo, I'm completely addicted! Its rare to come across slash fiction which are so well written, I suppose thats what kept me reading at first. Then I become totally submerged with the plot (which is fucking brilliant by the way) and now I want MORE. Hope your next chapter will be out soon! I checked your website, its pretty cool! Cant wait...
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jessica is a tramp! Down with Jessica. Rawr. >.>
I really hate her, lol. Lovelly chapter though. I wonder why the people that were supposed to show didn't show. Keep up the good work! <3
I really hate her, lol. Lovelly chapter though. I wonder why the people that were supposed to show didn't show. Keep up the good work! <3
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, I want more! More more more! ^^
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible!!! You guys are such powerful writers, you characters and your descriptive work just blows my mind every time i read this!
As a guy I have to commend you for the realism in the sex scenes between Boyd and Sin and their attitudes to it...it's just FUCKING REALISTIC and oh so perfect the really hot ones, especially the one where Sin is drunk and accuses Boyd after Thierry, make me do very naughty things to myself.
Just the thought of you reading this makes me hyper with excitement.
One of the reasons I got an account was so that I could finally review you.
Keep on making my jeans tight. I love you SO MUCH for it.
THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME BATHE IN YOUR ARTISTIC GLORY!!!!
As a guy I have to commend you for the realism in the sex scenes between Boyd and Sin and their attitudes to it...it's just FUCKING REALISTIC and oh so perfect the really hot ones, especially the one where Sin is drunk and accuses Boyd after Thierry, make me do very naughty things to myself.
Just the thought of you reading this makes me hyper with excitement.
One of the reasons I got an account was so that I could finally review you.
Keep on making my jeans tight. I love you SO MUCH for it.
THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME BATHE IN YOUR ARTISTIC GLORY!!!!
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I loved the Snakes. It's nice to have some more friendly (more or less at least) people... The game was a great idea. I loved it.
I always love to read the conversations between Sin and Boyd. They are very natural, very real in a way, because they aren't just about the mission or just about "private" stuff. Very nice :D
I always love to read the conversations between Sin and Boyd. They are very natural, very real in a way, because they aren't just about the mission or just about "private" stuff. Very nice :D
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay the excitement about the assignment is growing, I can't wait to get into the real action part!
Really liked Jorge, Liani and especially Tayla. Boyd is really good with these missions isn't he, an intelligent boy. That wasn't the easiest test he had to pass. I want his brain (not to eat it).
Sin's interaction with civilians can be so hilarious! I know there's a tragic side to it but it can be so funny, the way he just doesn't give a shit and replies with one word like as if the other person is a total imbecile. The way he just doesn't get the "normal" people. What a brilliant character.
*loves as usual*
Really liked Jorge, Liani and especially Tayla. Boyd is really good with these missions isn't he, an intelligent boy. That wasn't the easiest test he had to pass. I want his brain (not to eat it).
Sin's interaction with civilians can be so hilarious! I know there's a tragic side to it but it can be so funny, the way he just doesn't give a shit and replies with one word like as if the other person is a total imbecile. The way he just doesn't get the "normal" people. What a brilliant character.
*loves as usual*
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What were/are your expectations for the story? Sonny asks it...
Well at the start I just thought of the story: first partners, friends, friends with benefits and finally lovers and agent story in an alternative universe. ( my future expectations around chapter 6 or so!!!!!!!!!)
So the story is a ´bit´ more complex than I thought in the beginning :)
the characters are more complex and developed and we have finally sex between the two !
But:
Well somethere between showing more of the characters and their relationships you forgot the agent ´stuff´
I like this story very much but the missions at the start were great and interesting! so I liked this story even there was no slash in it!
I hope this will get better with the next chapters. :)
Then by explaining Boyd´s feelings you are repeating yourself very often, first I thought you just wanted to show how he was debating mentally with himself about the situation, then I thought maybe you wanted the readers to understand this and not to overread it but then it was only nerving to read the same over and over again....(not in the newer chapters)
and I don´t like this stupid woman because I still hope for some kind of romantic stuff and love declaration on Sin´s side.....love (and with romantic I mean Sin´s thinking of romantic)
Oh and I thought that there will be maybe some kind of small or big revolution! like Sin and Boyd decide that after all this mission Janus or someone else is the better working choice than staying there they are!
.....and they are together and live happiliy forever (something like that)
Well at the start I just thought of the story: first partners, friends, friends with benefits and finally lovers and agent story in an alternative universe. ( my future expectations around chapter 6 or so!!!!!!!!!)
So the story is a ´bit´ more complex than I thought in the beginning :)
the characters are more complex and developed and we have finally sex between the two !
But:
Well somethere between showing more of the characters and their relationships you forgot the agent ´stuff´
I like this story very much but the missions at the start were great and interesting! so I liked this story even there was no slash in it!
I hope this will get better with the next chapters. :)
Then by explaining Boyd´s feelings you are repeating yourself very often, first I thought you just wanted to show how he was debating mentally with himself about the situation, then I thought maybe you wanted the readers to understand this and not to overread it but then it was only nerving to read the same over and over again....(not in the newer chapters)
and I don´t like this stupid woman because I still hope for some kind of romantic stuff and love declaration on Sin´s side.....love (and with romantic I mean Sin´s thinking of romantic)
Oh and I thought that there will be maybe some kind of small or big revolution! like Sin and Boyd decide that after all this mission Janus or someone else is the better working choice than staying there they are!
.....and they are together and live happiliy forever (something like that)
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Just wow. Simply incredible how you capture the reality of these two poor souls. They keep breaking my heart. YOU keep breaking my heart. I get laughed at for reading fan-fiction but you've truly made it an art form! I'm so happy to find something so deep and meaty to sink my pervvy little teeth into. Thankyou for inspiration. Thankyou for Sin and Boyd. Thankyou for such sweet chaos. Thankyou for updates.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been so busy that I almost missed the new chapter, but good thing that I didn't because it's great as ever.
I feel terribly sorry for the guys - their lives were almost normal, and now they'll have to go back to being ruthless killers, I wonder if they are able to do that at all, besides, are they still fit after all the months without any physical exercise (apart from hot sex)..
I don't agree to some of the things said by the previous reviewers about Jess. The fact that she likes Sin and wants to get closer to him doesn't make her bad. It's not like Sin explicitly told her to leave him alone because he has a boyfriend. So there is nothing wrong with her using the oppotrtunity to kiss him.
Boyd's reaction was funny and sort of endearing - look who's jealous and posessive now! But I think he shouldn't be jealous, it's not like Sin will ever be as close to the other people as he is to Boyd. And it is actually a bit sad - there are lots of friendly people in the world, and to think that Sin will always consider them stupid civilians and will not fit in their society... :((
But I really like the fact that Boyd and Sin do not proclame their undying love and kiss and hug all the time. They both are rather disfunctional people and it would be strange if they behaved like a happy couple. And they both haven't had normal relationships (Boyd's friendship with Lou seems more like a childhood's thing to me), so they don't want to feel as if they have lost their freedom.
BTW, thanks for saying that you like reviews- it makes me feel better to know that you do read them :)
Thanks for the update and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
I feel terribly sorry for the guys - their lives were almost normal, and now they'll have to go back to being ruthless killers, I wonder if they are able to do that at all, besides, are they still fit after all the months without any physical exercise (apart from hot sex)..
I don't agree to some of the things said by the previous reviewers about Jess. The fact that she likes Sin and wants to get closer to him doesn't make her bad. It's not like Sin explicitly told her to leave him alone because he has a boyfriend. So there is nothing wrong with her using the oppotrtunity to kiss him.
Boyd's reaction was funny and sort of endearing - look who's jealous and posessive now! But I think he shouldn't be jealous, it's not like Sin will ever be as close to the other people as he is to Boyd. And it is actually a bit sad - there are lots of friendly people in the world, and to think that Sin will always consider them stupid civilians and will not fit in their society... :((
But I really like the fact that Boyd and Sin do not proclame their undying love and kiss and hug all the time. They both are rather disfunctional people and it would be strange if they behaved like a happy couple. And they both haven't had normal relationships (Boyd's friendship with Lou seems more like a childhood's thing to me), so they don't want to feel as if they have lost their freedom.
BTW, thanks for saying that you like reviews- it makes me feel better to know that you do read them :)
Thanks for the update and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!