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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! You two have seriously kept me on my toes with the last few chapters and I hope that you realise with that kind off cliffhanger, that there is no excuse for not adding the second chapter like in a few days at least!
*Phew* But seriously I was pretty convienced for few times that Sin was a goner, should´ve known that he is tougher than that, but I am really looking forward for him to wake up in near future.
Hell of a good job as always! Keep it up and update soon! :D
*Phew* But seriously I was pretty convienced for few times that Sin was a goner, should´ve known that he is tougher than that, but I am really looking forward for him to wake up in near future.
Hell of a good job as always! Keep it up and update soon! :D
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, that was...intense. I mean...it was like, I loved the converstaion between Boyd and Kassian. How Kassian made Boyd open up a little at least was very nice. I liked to hear his opinion about Sin, too. And I guess it's because Sin didn't like him that I thought Kassian would be more of an asshole. But apparently, he's one of the good guys :D
But afterwards...the debriefing was bad enough, but what they did to him after it was just horrible. I mean, I'm usually not easily moved by stories, but this made me feel real pity for Boyd. Phew. Things can only get better now, right? Right.
But afterwards...the debriefing was bad enough, but what they did to him after it was just horrible. I mean, I'm usually not easily moved by stories, but this made me feel real pity for Boyd. Phew. Things can only get better now, right? Right.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first. Something's wrong with this part right? At least the latter sentence starts with an "s" : "Relief threatened to darken the edges of Boyd's vision at the sight and he didn't even hear himself softly release the breath he didn't even know he was holding.s eyes narrowed and he spun the van around quickly to get the back of it closest to the helicopter." It seemed a bit awkward.
I'm so torn right now. I said earlier that I don't care if they fuck up the mission solely because of my hatred for the agency (which is growing and growing, and this chapter finalised my thoughts about it), but at least they wouldn't be suffering the way they are now. Are they going to blame the whole deal on Boyd? If that's the case it's a bit surprising. Maybe I've just forgotten he's supposed to be there as Sin's babysitter? Argh. And with that I don't mean that Boyd shouldn't have waited for Sin during the mission, but I was really angry that Connors doesn't see Boyd as a field agent but exactly that, Sin's babysitter.
And damn, if that video they're going to show Boyd is some tape sent by Janus of Sin's torture... I don't think I can stomach to read it. Although I'm not even sure it's possible of it being that one.
This made me really angsty. I hope there's some relief coming up at some point.
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I'm so torn right now. I said earlier that I don't care if they fuck up the mission solely because of my hatred for the agency (which is growing and growing, and this chapter finalised my thoughts about it), but at least they wouldn't be suffering the way they are now. Are they going to blame the whole deal on Boyd? If that's the case it's a bit surprising. Maybe I've just forgotten he's supposed to be there as Sin's babysitter? Argh. And with that I don't mean that Boyd shouldn't have waited for Sin during the mission, but I was really angry that Connors doesn't see Boyd as a field agent but exactly that, Sin's babysitter.
And damn, if that video they're going to show Boyd is some tape sent by Janus of Sin's torture... I don't think I can stomach to read it. Although I'm not even sure it's possible of it being that one.
This made me really angsty. I hope there's some relief coming up at some point.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, to end a chapter like you ended Chpt 40 is torcherous.
Wonderful story, great writing. Thank you!
Wonderful story, great writing. Thank you!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh hell no! you can not stop there nu-uh that's not fair. oh god how the hell can they do that to him. Don't they know that Boyd's mental stability is at risk if they do this . Damn that bastard torturer is probably enjoying it too. waaah the suspense I can't take it. You have to update or I'll go nuts. I really like this but the cliffhanger is horrible.
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi~i almost never write reviews (since im lazy^^;;) and i dont usually like action stories, but this is by far the best story im reading period! it so captivating and im always left wanting more! i love your writing style. the plots so original and im just in love with the romance and angst in the fic, you guys should make this in to a book, id buy it on the first day!xD this chap is like the highlight of my WHOLE week!lols so pls, i hope you post more soon, atleast for the sake of my health and desperation!^___^
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've spent the last week doing very little except reading this story. This is nothing short of brilliant. This is a masterpiece, sheer genius. You two are the best writers I've found to date on this site. Your writing skills surpass most published authors. Thank you, thank you for taking the time to share this. I just can't convey in words what a captivating story this is - so much of this is due to your excellent writing skills. Bravo, bravo!
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter, quite an emotional hell to be honest! It was more terrifying than I had expected. I had hoped it was someone else's body they found, and that Sin would be allright. And the house, the way you described it with rotting bodies, darkness, those flickering bulbs, the surgeon's table and tortured, dying Sin lying on it... The image that formed in my head was like from a real horror movie.
Boyd's regret and despair killed me a little, and those little memories from his and Sin's time together.. Very painful to read. The boy loves Sin, come on it's obvious. I was waiting for him to actually cry, which would be so unlike the usual Boyd. I wonder if he and Sin are ever capable of just letting go and let the pain come out in form of tears.
I'm repeatedly amazed by how much thought and intellect has been put into the story, like this time the group of wandering people all of a sudden coming from shadows, and Boyd's interaction with them, and the way they got to the secret gate. And the tunnel, more creepiness. But it was exciting! I'm sure Kassian will be popular after this, saving Sin from dying despite the fact that it seemed like there was no hope left. And for some reason, in my mind, I saw Archer as Agent Smith from Matrix haha, that hand miraculously keeping Boyd in place. Archer seems like a professional guy eh?
And I was greatly amused by Lo más chingón, top description there. I was wondering about him, and still am. An interesting character. Dangerous, but seems to have some morals.
"Sorry for interrupting your clandestine overnight bread delivery. Hopefully it won't ruin too many breakfasts" made me LOL. Oh Boyd.
I feel horrible just thinking what the near future might be like for both Boyd and Sin.. Sin (hopefully) waking up, arms and legs broken, the memories of torture, and the whole Boyd leaving him issue. I'm a bit worried Jessica has something to do with what happened to Sin, I really hope she doesn't, but the way Sin was compromised and got into that state.. Man, I really hope I'm wrong.
And how I love the length of your chapters, over and over again. I don't know how you manage to do that. It's wonderful. It was a great chapter, be proud.
ta.
(if this post comes two times it's because the site, or my connection, is being a dumbass.)
Boyd's regret and despair killed me a little, and those little memories from his and Sin's time together.. Very painful to read. The boy loves Sin, come on it's obvious. I was waiting for him to actually cry, which would be so unlike the usual Boyd. I wonder if he and Sin are ever capable of just letting go and let the pain come out in form of tears.
I'm repeatedly amazed by how much thought and intellect has been put into the story, like this time the group of wandering people all of a sudden coming from shadows, and Boyd's interaction with them, and the way they got to the secret gate. And the tunnel, more creepiness. But it was exciting! I'm sure Kassian will be popular after this, saving Sin from dying despite the fact that it seemed like there was no hope left. And for some reason, in my mind, I saw Archer as Agent Smith from Matrix haha, that hand miraculously keeping Boyd in place. Archer seems like a professional guy eh?
And I was greatly amused by Lo más chingón, top description there. I was wondering about him, and still am. An interesting character. Dangerous, but seems to have some morals.
"Sorry for interrupting your clandestine overnight bread delivery. Hopefully it won't ruin too many breakfasts" made me LOL. Oh Boyd.
I feel horrible just thinking what the near future might be like for both Boyd and Sin.. Sin (hopefully) waking up, arms and legs broken, the memories of torture, and the whole Boyd leaving him issue. I'm a bit worried Jessica has something to do with what happened to Sin, I really hope she doesn't, but the way Sin was compromised and got into that state.. Man, I really hope I'm wrong.
And how I love the length of your chapters, over and over again. I don't know how you manage to do that. It's wonderful. It was a great chapter, be proud.
ta.
(if this post comes two times it's because the site, or my connection, is being a dumbass.)
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am absolutly blown away. amazing
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh noo! poor sin! life isn't nice to him...i am so wishing for a new chapter right now! *closes eyes* 3 2 1 *opens* awww. not another chapter T_T. I CANNOT wait to see what happens. Man, Boyd must be feeling like a big shit right now...*hugs*