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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The first ch was really rough. I think I would prefer the story more if it didn't exist or you re-wrote it. I think it was just tooo unbelievable. The rest of the story was great though. I really enjoyed it. Especially Darr. i haven't figured him out yet and I can't wait to see what you reveal about him.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting story, but also a little confusing sometimes. But I like it.
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ireally like tis story its really well written u really feel 4 angel
but i think u would get more hits if u put it in the slash section :)
but i think u would get more hits if u put it in the slash section :)
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luv the story please write more
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update, i've been dying for an update or even better finish the story!!!
you're a good writer!
great story!!!
you're a good writer!
great story!!!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story please update!!!!!!
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Hmmmm, so are things better for Angel or not? Not sure what to think about Darr. Can't wait to read more. Don't get discouraged. You've got the makings for a very good story and so far I'm really intrigued by the characters and can't wait to learn more about them and to see where you take the story.
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just read the five chapters and I'm hooked. But now I'm worried it was all for naught. Please update!!!! Pleeeeeze!
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is setting up really nicely. It's not too explicit, but it's enough to get to jist of it, and I really like that. And there are so many plot twists in these last two chapters that it's really gotten a hold of my curiosity. Can't wait for the next part! Heart you!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this really good. I love the characters; I just wanna squeeze Angel and Darien 'til their eyes pop. You've got a set-up to an amazing story, and I really want to find out what happens next. And I like the way it's written too! Keep it up! I'll be stalking you.