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for .Lamia

by keithcompany

person The Mad Dragon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is truly an impressive story. Your knowledge of the various beasts, their origins and their histories is impressive, though I recognize the need for artistic creativity here and there. The explanations for the various creatures are very creative and original, and I'm throughoutly impressed with your ability to write as well.

This is one story that I will come back to often, in particular with the speed that you manage to update. :)
person k
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a Fantastic story. Every time I turn a page I've meat a new and unusual animal or person. I love this story. Please keep this one going. It's a wonderful mixture of Myth and Reality, and I'm loving it.

person Namo
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Dragons... I like the last arc. it was really interesting to understand the customs process in this world. The Satyr thing was really weird, too. I'm really enjoying this world of yours.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, maybe you should put a dragon in here sometime.
person Sin666
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome Story, seems like your jumping around a bit though it would be cool if you could make all the parts connect in the end for more of a plot
person isi
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehe...I assume the little deer thing was talking to Ms. Rush? sadly, I have a hard time imagining the transition from a human head to an animal's body, with it still being smooth and natural. but your story is wicked awsome despite my lack of imaginative capabilities ^___^ your cool!
person isi
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome idea, its so well developed I can't wait to read more!
person RavenNolan
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's rather interesting to see the interaction with humans and the hybrid creatures. Keep writing. I'll keep reading.
person Anonymous
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work, character development, and you can sure write fast. Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How does St James wind up in these situations?