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for .Lamia

by keithcompany

person Jennifer
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, now that ive finally realized that st. james's first name really is keeper and thats not his title.. i feel very stupid. other than that i cant wait for the continuation and comming chapters!
person isi
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahah she just wanted to be shot out like the torpedos? hehehehe ride of a lifetime...
person Seija
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy.
Fucking.
Shit.

You are probably the most bloody brilliant person in my world right now.
This story is amazing. I would buy this in print.
Beastial mythology and erotica rolled into one, damn. This one is a killer for me.
...
I apologize. I'm done spazzing out now.
But, please, do write more. Lots more.
person Jennifer
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am utterly entranced with this plot. Its extreamly well written and I love the characters *human and non human.* I look forward to updates.
person meowr
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i read your previous stories with the 'shrink' codes, didn't get me hooked. but this, this is really good. one of the best works on adultfanfiction's original/erotica section at the moment. it's so realistic - the descriptions of the mythical creatures, the interactions between characters both human and non-human, the details of st james' work. you have a great imagination, so keep writing. i can't wait for the next creature feature (i didn't mean to rhyme and make it kitschy.) =D
person UK
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Someone's been seriously working. Keep it up. I'm liking where this is going.

One thing, though, just for erotica's sake--a little more detail when you get to sex scenes? Just saying they fucked doesn't get me nearly as turned on as when you gave nice little bits to the time he was with the lamia.
person Foeofthelance/reddragon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, a fun little tale. I particularly enjoyed the bits with Clarisse. Something about a naga using Hannibal Lecter's voice just intrigues me. Might have to use that for my next game session, if I can get the voice right...

Anyway, glad to know you're still around man. Keep up the oddball stories, they are as amusing to read as ever.
person isi
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:O omg kill the pretty faerie? update! eek!
person a
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Kichou Neko
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's like Anita Blake mysteries meets X-files! gotta love it - thanks for putting these up so quickly. sexy and interesting wins every time :D