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for .Lamia

by keithcompany

person Church
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man I really like this story its has hella vareity and stuff. PLus theres alot to read since theres a bunch of chapters and James has a funny full name. Is james gonna get some more action in the future? I wish he had got it on with that Sphinx it culda been good. Alot more ocmbinations would be eve more awesome too but meh just suggessting. Good joba and nice work.
person isi
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha if only they knew O_O
person StuckBetweenDreamAndReality
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you write keep going please
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was adorable. even lamia like to play hide and seek occasionally. and i cant wait to see who the mystery person is. cant wait for more chapters! this story is amazing!
person jennifer
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry that last one was me..
person meowr
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the mo'o and shayah.. does this have something to do with the fact that grandma was a naga? i can't wait for the next chapter...
person Slinki
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to write in to tell you just how much I enjoy this story, since, truth to tell, I can't remember if I've reviewed before. Anyway, this is definitely one of the most fun stories to read that I have come across on this site. The characters are great and the situations they get into are simply (and usualy hilariously) amazing. great work! Keep writing, because I know many of us readers will be very dissapointed if you stop!
person jennifer
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update!!! Yey! hmmm.. wonder where this chapter will take us.. looks interesting..
person meowr
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
earthquake broke my isp's cables to the rest of the world. the world came to a halt on my side of the globe. -_-... ah well.. bumper harvest! i get 2 chapters in a row. wow, clarisse can create such a powerful illusion on more than one person at once? can she affect reality too? couldn't she have charmed the christians into not blowing themselves into bits? as much as i detest evangelical agendas, i hate it when people have to die. =p

i think you're spot on about blaming aliens/foreigners. it has always been that way, no matter where you go.

mo'os!!
person jennifer
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEY UPDATE! poor harpy! stupid religious zelots.. kill them all i say. and i just love keeper. cant wait for what happens next.