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for .Lamia

by keithcompany

person Sin666
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Faster damnit, nothing else is more important in your life right this instant as getting another chapter out :)
person Deadeyes
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I could see this being published in hard cover. I would buy this as a book if I saw it on the book stands.
person isi
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay an update, no comments really O_O another great chapter, this is just an enthusiastic...hurrah ^___^ and please update as soon as you have more!!
person Church
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol nice upadte and it was kidna funny since they both yeleld out "Shes a nage!" a fuckn naga oh hell lol who coulda missed that in teh pictures? Can't wait for enxt update dude keep up the good work till thn later.
person Switch
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you, This, is Brilliant. you seem to have such a wonderful grasp on your subject and your opinions regaurding certain views are subtly but no doubt throughly covered. also I enjoy your female charicters I find I am actually fond of them rather then disgusted by their cliche attitudes/behaviors, and that was a very unusual but welcome discovery. this has managed to hold my interest for the past hour and a half that I spent reading it all and I loved every second of it. I had to stop everything I was doing and focus all my attention here just to read as much as I could as fast as I could. thank you, your work is absolutely lovely.
person isi
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how exciting O_O but is clarisse willing to help? :O
person Neil
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just to say I don't normally review stories until they've reached their conclusion, but really enjoying this
person chancelor22
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic is GREAT! I am captivated. Do you mind if I post a link for others to come and enjoy this? If you could let me know...chancelor22@juno.com. Thanks.
person The Mad Dragon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, the mystery about the Mo'o only deepens... And I openly admit that I'm curious as to how the presence of a Naga can help impregnant a Mo'o. As always, though, your knowledge and creativity in the history and use of these many creatures is impressive, and keeps me checking for updates.

I'm outmost anxious to see if St. James will be siring a handful of Mo'o, along with the Lamia and Naga.
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep it up :)