rate_review Reviews

I love this fic. I really do. I have watched it from the relative beginning, and I feel terrible about not reviewing, but it's never too late, now is it? Nope.

So, essentially, I enjoy all the sex scenes. They are different, and anything *different* on this site, is hard to come by, which makes it all the more amazing when encountered. Don't you think?

Your style flows like a river over stones. Smooths out all the hard places and makes it a terribly enjoyable read. The encounters are different. Your mythological creatures, shows your historical fortitude with such a topic, and it's appreciated that you certainly know your stuff.

Keep it up. I've also checked out some of your other fictions, and although I couldn't neccesarily relate, I thought they were a particularly interesting branch of fetish.

I guess...YOU interest me..Meh, goddamn sociological courses. ^_^

Ok, so I stumbled upon this story when all you had were the first few chapters up. I spent all of this time reading it (and other stories of yours) with guilty pleasure, and without reviewing. I am sorry, you deserve better than that - this is an absolutely entertaining tale (and clearly a lot of hard work). I have checked quite regularly for updates, and you have never failed to have one waiting for me. But it's been a couple of months now, and I hope everything is ok, merely some writers block. Anyway, I really miss reading about the adventures Mr. St. James and all of the zoo creatures (Ah, Clarisse). I don't know how much of the the "history" you make up and how much is actually old legend you dug up, but boy, do you have a fantastic imagination! Thank you so much for writing a sexy story that manages to keep its sense of humor. Please keep it up!

Keith,

I read these in what feels like a marathon session. I guess that will teach me to follow links sooner. I was actually cut off last night, about chapter 39 because of Aff's downtime. I couldn;t wait to get home this evening to finish. This story is a gem.

I really admire the way you've manipulated the mythological creatures.

The last sequence was a change of pace, the Bubba storyline. Although the lines were extremely funny, it took me a chapter or two to shift gears. Then I needed to go back and reread them.

This story is well plotted, the characters likeable, it's well written, with few spelling or punctuation issues to detract from the flow.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

~Madapple

Keith,

I followed the links to this story. Chapter 1 has me intrigued in a way I haven't been in a while. It is interesting to see the manipulation of mythological characters. Your level of detail is just enough to draw a reader in without giving so much detail that we're overwhelmed. It
is a delicate precipice and you've navigated it well.

I found myself rooting for Medusa.

While I enjoyed the quirks, I was kind of bored. Can you get back to the storyline, little of it that there is? I really liked the series up to the comedy part.

*snorts* oh yes. cause potential is Key.

Cute, just love the redneck commercials with mythical animals. This is such a gas and I love these.

lol...this just keeps getting weirder and weirder XD

this is an incredible story ive always been a big fan of mythology and with different takes and what could happen and stuff like that makes this story one of my all time favorites

yet another highly entertaining chapter, fighting boredom and routine is soemthign I think most people can realte to. Lovely.