rate_review Reviews

i love it, i love it! i think this is one of those stories where you can't help but be drawn to it. anyways, i'll be checking out other works from you.

I enjoyed this short story, as much for the fact that it seems based on the old "Vampire: The Masquerade" series (which has sadly been abandoned by its creators now.) as much as for the story itself. I actually felt some of the flowery language and desciriptions early in the story didn't quite work, but as it went on it became more natural sounding. I'd love to read more V:TM stories, if I could only find them. Well done.