rate_review Reviews

Thank goodness you're back for good! After I've read your note I've been checking here often. Great timing by the way because my fall semester is almost over! Okay, back to reviewing this story. Chapter 1 was a really good introduction into Kristen's character because we can see she have issues with her self esteem and being known for who she is sounds really important to her. Nina sounds like the right character to balance Kristen's character out by being the opposite. What happened to Patch was cruel but I couldn't help but laugh. I like Patch for some reason and for some reason my gut says to not like Derek even though he is rich and hot. Chapter 2, did I mention how much I adore you because we get to see how Lianna and Joseph are doing and he is still with Broken Dynamite which is awesome. Aiden sounds adorable and I think in the near future he deserves his own story, hint, hint, haha. My gut instinct was right that Derek is trouble and he is not charming at all by being so late. I'm starting to see why you've mention why it will get dark in this story. You have my attention so crank out the chapters would you. Just kidding but yeah it's good so far. Thank you Tirch for writing again.

it is a nice start. plz write more soon.

Okay, Derek is a complete jerk. I am almost afraid of what's going to happen there. Thanks for the quick update and the glimpse of Lianna and Joseph. I was hoping for some of those.

You are awesome for updating so soon.

And I have a bad feeling about Derek... Evil...

I wuv Patch to pieces!

This spunds really good PLEASE continue!!!

Hey, glad that you are back, I love your work. This story is great so far, I'm sure it will keep being great because all of your work is, can't wait for more!!

im just so glad that you're back. i've missed your stories. and your characters. gosh, all of them. im definitely going to be re-reading your stories. anyways, like how this story is going. i love spinoffs! lol. anyways, please update soON!

OHHHHHHHH I love it so far...sounds like its goin to be a great one...Im glad you decided to go ahead with it and I hope you get the reviews that you need to keep you motivated with it...ttyl tata

Man, who cares if it's going to be dark in later chapters. The point is, YOU'RE BACK!!

Oh yes, and a very nice start to this one. I had kinda forgotten about Lianna's sister, and it's nice to see you fleshing out all the characters you've created, no matter how minor they might have seemed in other stories.