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Did I mention how I don't like Derek and how shady he is. His pseudocharm makes me roll my eyes. I don't blame Kristen for falling for his suaveness (sarcasm) because he knows from the start that she would fall pray to him. Guys like Derek can pick girls like Kristen a mile away. I like your characterization of Nina because she'll tell Kristen what she don't want to her and that's a good thing. Tirch I have a feeling that you're taking us to a place where the word complex doesn't even describe what Kristen will be facing with this guy Derek and the dangerous part is that he made it seem like she wanted it and that he did it for her. I also like how you made it so subtle the way Derek pressures Kristen. I hope Patch is able to help. Good chapter and quite an insight into how Derek has the upper hand with Kristen. Thanks for updating.

Happy you're updating again. Wish there'd be some new styles to describing the Derek's egoistic side though.. Not sure if I have phrased correctly- doubt it but.. uhh That's why I'm the reader and you the writer! : )

I like this story so far... I'd like to see where things lead with Derek, though I currently have mixed feelings about him. And I have a feeling that Patch and Nina may end up together? But I could be totally wrong. I've read all of your past stories and have LOVED them. Looking forward to reading this one as well!!!!!

I was out of town for the past two weeks, and unable to check AFF, so I was pleasantly pleased when I saw you had started a new story. I especially loved the Broken Dynamite Series, so this is a cool story for me because as I can already see we will be able to catch up on Lianna and the crew. What I love most about your writing is how you develop the charters and how you write about things that we often face in life, but with a definite flare. I love your writing and I can't wait for you to update.

You had me at Chapter 1. I kinda see where u want to go with this story. I also appreciate you telling us that is was going to be dark. but please don't make it too dark. These characters have the ability to break my heart. Welcome back!

Oft. I'm so excited about this. I loved the idea of a Kirsten story, and I like that it's going to get darker in later chapters. Grand :]

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it's nice to read u again!!!! she is sooo sweet about how she is obviously hot yet so unaware. awwwwwww write more of course!!!!!!

this is great so far. Kirsten is a little naieve though and can't see the player through the lust haze. but still, it's true to reality and that's what makes it amazing. good to see that you're back too...finally. it's been a while that lasted too long. update as soon as possible!
yours truly,
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love it, great to have you back!

YOURE BACK YAY!!!!! First of all I have to say welcome back, and I have sooooo missed your stories. I just got through reading both chapters of Noticed, and I must say, I am really interested to see where this goes. I love all your stories, and am so elated that you have desided to do a story about Kristin. I adored Like A Dream Come Ture, and love getting "updates" on Lianna and Joseph!!! As always keep up the good work...... I can't wait for more, be my dealer and feed my addiction!


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