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This chapter was so funny! "I'd be so humiliated, I'd have to change schools." Omg, too funny! And I love, love the word mommarazza!

So, poor Satsuki was jealous. I'd hate to think how bad he would feel if Sora actually started liking Amy. Altho I can't see that happening.

Well, so glad you're back and the story's back! :)

OMFG, for someone who is sick and tired of writing lemons, boy can you write lemons! Hahahah Boy, if these are any indications of your Erik/Alexis story, I can't wait till THEY get together! Hahah

Wow, I kinda feel sorry for the orange girl, Amy. She doesn't know what's gonna hit her! lol

Great job; I really like this story; can't wait for the update!

This is a very sweet story. I've read a few "twincest" stories on here and I must say, this is extremely well written.

I'm looking forward to reading more; hopefully it won't be another four years until you update again! lol

Good so far.

Update soon.

darkangel1210

I like how you show the relationship between the two brothers and included their life outside the bedroom, such as their sister who sleeps in late during school days, but has to be up early to watch cartoons. Maybe it's my age, but the fact that you threw in Sailormoon. . . (lol aww, memories if only I could sink into those days more often). I don't often review stories, but I liked this.

Your plot so far is strong. I like how you opened the scene with them in bed trying to uncurl from each others arms, knowing they need to be in their own beds in fear their parents find out what is going on, yet they just can't pull away. Their bond seems so strong that just from reading this, I feel a connection to both and feel a little worried what you might later put them through. Great character work on that.

Dialogue wasn't just thrown in. Every word said made sense. I hate how often people try to make jokes and they don't realize that it's only funny if you are 12 or 13 and hearing that comment for the first time, which writers for some reason like to do such as playing on words. The lines between your characters seemed so natural, I really loved it.

Discriptions. A++ (yes two) You didn't over do it and yet you gave enough to make me feel like a comfy intruder, noticing a warm bed with warm bodies and the love between the two boys and the love of their house hold, because they didn't cuss about their sister, they acknowledged her which was sweet, expecting her though they were a little flustered that she often caught them unprepared, but she being young wouldn't really notice that and you showed that by how they dealt with her.

I think I'll check up on this story again. Good work.

Cute start - twincest is the shit.