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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best original stories ive read so far :)
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey t.k! I love this story. It is so good. Keep up the great writing and please update soon.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, THAT WAS SOOOOO GOOD!!! i love how innocent she is, and chris is a hottie.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter in a great story!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I was getting aggrivated with the characters at the constant desturbances(sP?) and it was good to see them finally get somewhere.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
Really well written.
How old is Chris?
Really well written.
How old is Chris?
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done so far. I like the pace you're going at, nice and steady. Glad you're not rushing things. These two are so sweet together. I like 'em! :) Keep writing! I'm excited to read your next chapter.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great quality story, sure to be one of my favorites. I especially like how the constant interruption of the characters keeps sexual tension high... Anyway, PLEASE keep up the great work!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
quite enjoyable...uh hopefully you're next chapter will be as good as this one was!