rate_review Reviews

Hey! I read this a while back (when you first started on it I think), and I think we talked a bit at some point as well:) Anyway, I was rereading this, since I remembered it as a fantastic story, and after all these years, it's still amazing. I was a bit upset to see that you hadn't updated it, but in the event that you ever check back, I hope that your muse will inspire you to finish their story. You did a great job of portraying Chris; he's an incredibly appealing character. Mimi's also very likeable as well. Julie is okay, but since you're writing in first-person narrative, it's a bit harder to like or dislike her, and I suppose that I'm more of a Mimi-esque girl (I'm very protective of my friends and family too), so that's why I like her portrayal so much!

I think it would be interesting if you gave their little sisters a bit more screentime. I really enjoyed those little interludes where the sisters barge in and talk about them, and it would be interesting to have a sibling perspective of Julie and Chris' affair. But it's just a suggestion, and to be honest I'd be over the moon if I saw ANY update from you;)

Hope you see this review and remember this story, and come back to update!
xxx

That chapters were good, very sweet. When are you going to update? Or is this story finished? If not you should have Chris being adopted or he is really Julie's step cousin and Julie had no idea but Chris knows something along those lines and it does not come out toward the end. But yeah update soon and do not give up. :)

Believe it or not...i'm still waiting for an update on this story...

*hugs you*
YOU FUCKING UPDATED!!! HELLZ YEA!!! *does happy dance*
I was waiting mother fucker!
UPDATE MORE!!!!!
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

I cheered when she it Scott the Asshole. Don't yell as 4:30 in the morning tends to wake up the house.LOL This is a really good story and I so can't wait to read the next chapter to find out what is going to happen next. Keep up the great writing and please please please post more when you can.
Tanya

How could this stupid a**** Scott still touch her and try to talk to her after all he has done?? I hate him sooooo much!!! Ahrg!!!!!
I´m waitin´ for the next update!! :)

Thanks!!! I was so happy when I saw that there was an update - finally. and I was even happier when I saw that is was such a loooong chapter!! ^^
can you already tell how much more chapters this story will have till it´s finished??

I didn't think the update was bad. It was actually quite realistic for an aftermath of a rape chapter. I commend you on the quality of the story & hope you update soon. This is really very good.

DAMN YOU MOTHER FUCKER!
UPDATE THIS SHIT!!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!
I just turned 18 yesterday but my friend showed me this story about month ago and I am in love with it!
FUCKING UPDate!!!

PLEASE UPDATE CHAPTER 9!!!!! I L O V E This story and I've been checking back for almost a month now to see if you had updated. and...and...and...-cries- you haven't!! >__< please update as soon as you can!!!


love,
LittleKittieInTheCorner

((I'm signing up soon, and this will be my name :3 Your story has given me inspiration!! ^-^!))