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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not one to tell you about captitalization in the I's in your story, or how it just falls into sex, because you did say, "not much of a plot". But, the over all review for your story is...
It was good, very good; and interesting.
It was good, very good; and interesting.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good, i have to say that i enjoyed it.