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person Keen
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"The air seemed to coalesce into a shapeless pudding while Riosuke thought, reality taking on a leaden, surreal sheen as Eiji zoomed in on the slightly pocked face, the neat goatee, the silver nose ring that moved with each long drag."

Fabulous line. I can't wait to see how she came to be entwined in all this and what she'll have to do to survive.
person Mitche
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute, I like it. Please update.
person _twn
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously such a big fan of yours. *runs off to read*
person panpan
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I already know that I;m going to really enjoy this one!!
person PrimCath
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, please continue writing!
person TOBY
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pretty damn awesome... please continue
person Kichou Neko
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning - More Please!
person Nalani
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have fallen for this story, head over heals! You have an amazing writing style, just great! I can't wait to know more about this 'complication'. Like, how she became involved with these men and what they will be doing with her in Oasaka. Please update soon, I just have to know!
E.M.

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