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for A Light in the Darkness

by MakaiKitty

person tainted_love
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story! I want, no, I need to see more of it! :o) Your writing style is lovely, as usual, and I am able to enjoy the flow of the story without the obstacles of glaring grammar mistakes (though I wouldn't call myself an anal grammarian, I think we can all agree that stories with standard grammar are a bit easier to read). Anyway, I hope you are still planning to write more. Can't wait!
person supergirlanna
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is off to a wonderful start! Your writing style is great, and the plot line is amazing, please update soon!!!
person Car Jack
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first review I've left for any of your stories and I feel that I've neglected you because of this. You have a way of writing that draws the reader into your stories, causing then to actually visualize the scenerio. Keep up the great work and thanks! I loved your new story and wait for more.
person Silverdemon
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was incredibly awesome. I truly hope there is going to be more. I'd love to know what would happen next. You've created two very intriguing characters here. Definitely have to read more of your work. Thanks for including the links.
person Taggurit
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story of yours I have ever read and it was really good...I don't usually like original stories but I just can't wait to read more ^_^... crazy-broken-guy and caring-must-do-right-thing guy...whats not to like? I'll make sure to check out your other stories if my laziness will allow me.
person Genie
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! But then I love most of your stories.
Hope that you will continue with this story.
person DrkDreamer
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very - VERY - compelling story. Morgan's fear, hatred and need are made real - and Laine's need to help.

I love the description of Laine's empathy with Morgan enhacing his desire and pleasure. (I've read such things before, but this is particularly well done.)

Looking forward to learning about Morgan's 'crimes' - and what Laine will do to stop the execution.
person evil_saint
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you got me hooked... Very compelling start. Can't wait to see where you go with it...