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for A Light in the Darkness

by MakaiKitty

person freefall1310
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
if i had the time i would have reviewed all of your stories a million times now. sadly i don't but maybe one day^^ i love your style of writing it is so professional that i thought i was reading my fairy tale books all over again but a little bit of slash ;) keep writing! your gallery is an absolute treasure cove and i'm so lucky to have stumbled by=)
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and I do hope you will pick it up again once you finish with all of your other projects. I'm anxious to know how Laine will rescue Morgan and then to see how Morgan will react. It's a good start and I will keep checking to see of you have started a new chapter. Right now I am looking forward to Secound Sight and seeing what happens next. As always I wait with a baited breath.
person smint45
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this one shot, empathy was always somthing I really liked! I really hope he gets to rescue him before the execution!! I also hope that someday you post the rest of the story! I would be very happy if you could email me if you do ( my mail is kuraitenschi@web.de)I hpe to see more soon !!!
person Sekre
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this one shot was very good. It was like one of those really good commercials that get ya pumped for the movie. Can't wait to see more of this fic, it had my heartstings pulled. :)
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm new but I can honestly say you are one of my favorite authors on this site so far.

I love all the stories I've read, especially your daemon ones, and I look forward to the continuation of this storyline!
person Kuromei
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I don't want it to be a one-shot! DX I wanna know what Laine's planning! X3 I'd love to see the extended version. ^w^
person supergirlanna
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo very happy to hear that you are planning to add some to this. As i said before the concept is unbelievabley eye catching and your writing style is wonderful. Reading this fic is irresistible! I am looking forward to an update some time in the future, and it's fine even if it isn't as wonderful as the first chapter, though i doubt your worries will prove to be true. I wouldn't be surprised that it will only get better!!!
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
was he going to kill him or set him free?
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see you update this story. ^__^ Laine is such an interesting character, so kind and determined... But poor Laine. To have to go through something like that? Even with the backwash of positive emotions, it still has to be extremely painful. X___X
person Angela
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey! i just started reading your stuff and i think i love this one the most. Though i'm really curious to see how laine plans to nix an execution date, hope you decide to continue this in the near future

Later ^^