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Umm I'm wondering if this is the end of the story or if you just stoped writing?

Hmm... I know you've said that they can't all fit in the back seat of the car, but if it's the type of car that I'm thinking of (like one of those old Lincoln Town Car boats - just cheaper) it has the old bench seat with the armrest in the middle. I was thinking that you could have two of them in the back doing her at the same time while the third one is forcing her to deep throat him in the front. Ms. Donna, of course, is half sprawled (probably in a very odd and uncomfortable angle) over the armrest to accomodate them all. I'd really like to see some double and triple penetration as well as some double stuffing (vaginal, anal, or both). It'd be very nice if after the car incident is over, there are many repeats (not necessarily a car or the same people - it'd be nice to see a lot of different kinks and types of men) and eventually a pregnancy - which for some reason - (maybe a medical complication of sorts) she has to go through with. Perhaps you can flesh out the characters a bit more - give them a bit more story. Perhaps bring this "Cousin April" in on a bit too. It'd also be nice to see a bit of femdom - or at least an intelligent, willful woman (which Donna is obviously not). I've liked what you've written so far - it's pretty tame by my standards (the stuff I've described in this review is too as a matter of fact...) but it's fun to read. I really hope you update someday.

Sincerely yours,

Mizuki Kurenaida

(Oh, and about the pregnancy thing... I just say that because one of my greatest pet peeves is when people write about men cumming inside of women multiple times and don't even THINK of mentioning pregnancy. Or birth control at the very least.)

that was beyond HOTT!!! please, please, please update soon!

lolcats

update please!!!

Crazy, crazy, crazy.
That makes me horny horny horny.

Woot! This is a great story (just like all the others you've written)!!! Keep up the wonderful and smutty work! I love it. I only hope you update one of your stories soon; I miss them terribly.

Um i think she needs all three, what about you??

i loved it. please write more. i wanna see daryl do her. <3

this sounds so fun
when's the next chpt coming up?