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for Once A Slave II: Magewise

by KaticaLocke

schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not sure how I missed last week's chapter - but what a delightful surprise for tonight.

I love the building tensions between Lark and Naeven - but even more than that, I adore the PLOT.

You just reminded me all over again why I've loved this story since the first chapter.
person melissa
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore your story, you never disappoint me, I just wanted to let you know how well this is going, I read your side story as well, i'd buy this if you manage to get it published and in stores.
person sveta
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are positively evil- they had the beach scene and lark was going to make a love confession, only to be interrupted! :P i have a feeling something really unpleasant will happen soon, and i'm still dying to know how that drawing will play out... "You really need to get over yourself - your ass isn't that great." their bickering is full of wit and is as priceless as usual. :)
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just lovely - we're actually seeing Sactaren being NICE!
person sveta
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god, that's so sweet they're dancing. :) and i definitely wasn't expecting sactaren to resemble the man in the drawing. that has to be a huge coincidence... well, it must be, but i'll have to wait to find out.

it's a real treat getting an update every tuesday, btw. :)
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers madly* You are evil, getting Lark stuck to the table like that. And Lark keeping secrets from Naeven will definitely not lead to anything good.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't reviewed for a while - though I look forward to and enjoy each chapter.

Have a feeling the party is going to be the catalyst for lots of future happenings.

I've thoroughly enjoyed watching Lark and Sactaren draw closer.

(And little Khas has friends!)
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting insights into Naeven's state of mind. So he's holding back is he? I confess I sort of miss that fire of his as well.
person Rosei
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22

Wow!
I love all this mystery, the different planets,
Seattle! HA! These two hotties realy get me going!

Thanks!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating - Naeven actually wants to be the submissive in a BDSM relationship...

And all this time, I was sure he was a Dom.

Should console Lark. Naeven wants pain - but his own. Not Lark's.

Could be a match made in heaven.