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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"That makes it official, then - it takes significant intelligence to be that cruel. Just look at humans--"
"Drop dead," I say, and head for the stairs.
^^*giggles*
"Drop dead," I say, and head for the stairs.
^^*giggles*
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - "More fun than I've had in years." Oh my God. I laughed so hard that I spit my coffee out at the screen at that line. God, I love this story. The sexual tension drives me crazy, though. But it does make sense. It's more realistic with it. I really can't see someone that's been a slave all his life and raped too many times to count hopping into bed with the first sexy Mage he sees. Although, Lark does know Naeven but then there's a lot he doesn't know about him. He's just too mysterious. Oh my God. I can't believe I said that. Oh well. Can't wait for your next update!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to watch Khas suffer again!!! -CRIES- Ah well tis the price I pay for such an excellent story. I cant wait for the publishing date!!! Keep on updating!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - I really like that Khas chapter so I don't mind. It's really sad. And I don't really remember that conversation with Tam so I'm guess it's new or even if it's old it doesn't matter since I don't remember it. Anyways, I can't wait for your next chapter!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Oh, there he is!"
I dont know why I thought that was funny, but it was great. Nearly knocked me off the chair.
I dont know why I thought that was funny, but it was great. Nearly knocked me off the chair.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bleh... quite hard to rmb what has and hasn't happened. still, looking forward to more...
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love you! Thanlkyou for writing the second part I have been waiting for a long while, I kept checking back to see if you had wrote it yet! TY!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm confused about this story. Did you stop at some part of the first story and rewrite it so now we ae reading the story over again????
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yes its good to see you are writing again more please
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok...found all the changes a little confusing...but that's only because I still have the memory of the original story still in my head. I'm sure, once it's read as you've now done it, it'll all read fine. That's because you're such a damn good writer! lol..
Is there any way of getting a peek at how the new changes read?...
Is there any way of getting a peek at how the new changes read?...