rate_review Reviews

*gulps*

I read the first paragraph... and FORCED myself to be TORN away from the screen....
But... I was thinking.... even if the book costs $ 17... im guessing, after cutting away cost for printing (and etc), cost you pay to publishing company and the editors, the amount you get in the end is... like... a single digit. I don't know how well GLBT books sell, but, well, seeing as not even half the world accepts this with open arms... your potential target audience has already been cut in half even before you begin.

it's not fair. Why can't I give you all $17 (as measly as it is coming from one person. $17 can what, but you food for a day?) depressing thought is it not? but well, publishers and editors have to eat too.
hmmmmmmmmmmm..... o___o

Sorry for leaving a rant in a review. but. yeah.
Good luck, and All the best.
May your sales skyrocket~ ;3 (so you can buy more cookies-ahem- food.)

- nekoii

Hey, how's the muse doing? New chappie up soon..?

but wot about wot sactaren said about 16 years, wot about lucifers pain, wot happens in ther relationship, does lark end up telling the ppl hes a mage, wot about sactarens daughters, wot about schaff liking sac. wot about kivixl being larks slave, wot about wotever that feather belonged to...?

please tell me that isnt the real 'ending' of the entire thing and that there is going to be another one? i wanna know the end of the story.

im surprised i havent reviewed till now, but apparently i havent. but instead of going on and on im gonna keep this sweet, short, & to the point.....i love your storey. its awsome. YOU'RE awsome. i hope you continue to update. And i think its really cool that you're turning it into a book. nice huh? i'll try to update more often

I certainly want more, of course - I want everything to be resolved.

But as an ending to this PART of the story - it's superb. Sactaren still mysterious but close to admitting feelings for Lark. And Lark finally facing up to his feelings for Sactatren.

Rest up - do your editing - and then PLEASE come back and tell us more!

I think an even better ending would be if he was just pretending to be asleep so that the reader can know that he hears it, Lark doesn't have to know he knows but it would give me some closure if we can know that he heard...

Wow that was great!!! our lucky heroes....please Update as fast as you can...this story is awesome!

Such frustrating boys those two are. Lark and tact need to meet some time. They could sit down to tea and hash out their differences so Lark can stop making an ass of himself at every possible moment.
I love this story. Can't wait for more... really. I check for updates far more often than is healthy, methinks.

Just want to let you know that I like your fic....