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schedule
May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Love the characters. Eager to read more.
schedule
February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HI,
I just wanted to tell you, i like this story alot. It has all the parts to make a great story. The talent and creativity are there, but more emotions and setting description would do to enhance the already wonderful story. This is my own opinion, please do not take offence.
chow,
shinta
I just wanted to tell you, i like this story alot. It has all the parts to make a great story. The talent and creativity are there, but more emotions and setting description would do to enhance the already wonderful story. This is my own opinion, please do not take offence.
chow,
shinta