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for Better to Love

by ElectricDeity

person madlodger
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Hey, Scriba , this is interesting. looks like a good start, the plot is pretty good. Will read updates on this for sure. Wish you had posted it in the Slash section since I don't come to this one often.
person bambi4real
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THis was a good start. THe beginning was a little confusing. I mean the first paragraph I'm not sure if that was in the future past or present.