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yesss i am WAY glad that liz got her rewards...

Hi.

wow.. you just described me & and my girlfriend.... i REALLY like that fic, would be cool to develop an eventual relationship between them two... i'm here for ideas, if you like!!!

ciao.

R.

You've written an excellent bit of F/F here. :) I don't know if you have ideas to continue this one...but if not, I'd certainly like to see more from you in the future.

I'm glad you decided to add the second chapter, it was just as amazing as the first. As much as I'd love to see a third, you may be right. A third chapter might not work too well. If you wanted to do a PWP, then this is perfect. But if you want to explore the characters, your story leaves the opportunity to do that as well. I must say though, usually ex's aren't brought up during sex, at least in my experience, but the way you did it was...well...hot. If you find any other old stories you want to try out on the site, please, do. I for one, will be happy to read your work.

Niiice. This story's hot. hm, i cant decide if u should add, but if its as good as the others, then ill read.

Well you cant end it in a cliffhanger. Write a 3rd chapter, please! Not a lot of fem slash on this site and this one is pretty hot.

Allow me to explain something to you. You cannot just stop there. It isn't nice, and I tend to get bitchy when perfectly amazing, and not to mention accurate stories just stop when everyone reading should agree that it needs to continue. And incase you weren't sure, yes, this is supposed to be a good review. Your story is bloody amazing and the ONLY problem I found was that it was ended where it was. That was just mean my friend. Very, very, mean!

Great stuff! Loved it!

That was great! I loved it! *thumbs up*

Very nice.
Yay for Jack Daniel's!
Will we get the other side soon?