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for The Bet

by Kakashilover

person TOBY
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO FRICKEN WAY!!! WTF... suspense... suspense! cheap but effective. be waiting.
person TOBY
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Back again... nice progression. Not too fast. Not too unbelievable. Good job.
person ree
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! hope you update soon!
person Loopypants
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's been awhile sense I've read a good story. I feel that this is going to be great if you keep going. I can't wait for more:)
person TOBY
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's worthy of continuing for sure. Its plot is different and yet it is very promising. Please continue.
person Lily
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
definitely gold, not crap!
person ree
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far, so good! can't wait for you to update soon!