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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story!
No.. love's still an understatement..
It's very well written and the plot is marvelous!
I cannot wait to get more out of it from you!
No.. love's still an understatement..
It's very well written and the plot is marvelous!
I cannot wait to get more out of it from you!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ^_^ please keep writing <3
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice pretty good cant waiit to see where u go with it hope the chapters get longer
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I like your story and especially Seliez's expressions that makes him special and cute. And Darres is kinda mysterious. I would gladly like to know more Darres or actually both if them. I can't wait to read more of your this...
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleeeaaassse write another chapter soon.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor boy, I feel sorry for him! Then, yet Im jealose! Great chapter, upadte soon please!!!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahem... over-all it's not a bad story, very little typos and not a bad theme, though it's progressing through uh, how to say this, being taken by his will to loving a little bit faster than I'm used to reading.. but then again, that's my personal preference; I like long stories :\ Anyways, the main points of my rambling is that it's quite good, but you might want to expand on that reluctant love theme a little... you know, to increase tension or what-not :) Good job, and I hope you keep up with it :)
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha! awww, so cute!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story so far!
Just a small annoyance. Make sure to "seperate" who is doing what
Example:
>He was very suddenly being pinned against the wall by the taller man, his lips and tongue trailing down his >collarbone, worshiping his body in such a way it made his knees feel weak.
Is it D's lips and tounge or S's... If you think it over it is clear, but it ruins the flow...
But like i said: Nice story!
Just a small annoyance. Make sure to "seperate" who is doing what
Example:
>He was very suddenly being pinned against the wall by the taller man, his lips and tongue trailing down his >collarbone, worshiping his body in such a way it made his knees feel weak.
Is it D's lips and tounge or S's... If you think it over it is clear, but it ruins the flow...
But like i said: Nice story!
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.... x.x Wow, hot vampire on human action! I love this story and I just started reading it today... xux; *sweatdrops a little* You must UPDATE! ^^; I'm not rushing you, but it's a really good story! >//u//< Especially the very last chapter you wrote about Mister Vampie giving a little something to the boy... >///U///< *laughs* UPDATE SOON!