rate_review Reviews

This story is really interesting. It does have an interesting plot too, unlike a lot of other stories (not that I complain about that...I like smut in stories...but sometimes I feel the need of a plot too)

I really liked this story. Starting off I didn't know what to expect but I think I read one of your other stories and liked it so I gave this one a chance. I think something you might consider to entice more readers is changing your blurb to something that is more informative that maybe gives a little of the plot away. The first half of the story read like a peaceful sweet old-fashioned china doll dream then when the rape occurred it was like rudely awakening to the harsh modern reality of blood and flesh. I loved the dichotomy of the switch. I also definitely felt the mystery because I am curious as to what really happened in that room. Did she really die or was she just a ploy to entice him to his death? Oh and in the second line there is a typo but it is really quite small. Good job.

Wooooooowwwww.. You rendered me speechless and thats a good speechless. The rape was hard for me to read--figuratively speaking not literally--but I see that it was necessary for the foundation of the story. Your writing is very well done. Update soon.

Interesting start ^^