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i was also wondering if i can do some fanart! ^_^
i also wish to post it on my DA account, and i will say who the characters are and who they belong to and i will have a link to this story! ^_^

*fangirls* Oh my God! It took me three days to read this, but...Oh my God! What a place to leave off at! Either ways, I do have a few things (Mostly snooty predictions to make), but I'll get my thoughts for this chapter out of the way first.

I so knew Rane was gay and it's so cute. I almost want Uri to go for it...then I remember Shawn and I'm like "Holy Fucking Hell NO!" It's really cute though, why...I have no clue. But, it's nice to know that all the jocks aren't out to kill poor Uri. But, what is with that jackass Kyle? (Meanie stole my nephew's name...) I heard about some people, mostly men, who 'punish' gays by raping them. Is that what this is all about?

Either ways...on with the rest...

I so hope we'll get a full smut scene. Those little tid bits are really great but leave me wanting more and feeling sorry for poor Uri.

And, for some reason...I get the feeling that Uriel and Shawn are actually blood related from their mother's reaction to Uriel mentioning something about Shawn and him no being related. Wonder if that's true...

I have to say...I'm glad you reviewed my fanfiction. I feel all uber happy to have such a great author reply to one of my stories. I hope you know that I'll be following this story as I hope you'll do with mine.

Oh, and I love where you got Uriel's name...I, myself, was raised Catholic (Which is why that's the religion I use in most of my fics...), but I never got into the faith and now simply relay on my own views about God.

Great Story and can't wait for the update!

GAH THIS IS NOT FAIR!!!!!! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MAKE ME LIKE RANE AND SHAWN BOTH????? WHY CAN'T ONE JUST BE EVIL?????? Hee hee I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!!!!! That should be an interesting conversation. Shawn's gonna get PISSED!!!!!! GEEZ I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE VERY VERY VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!

Darn it all!!! Lost again!!! I'm the third!!! YOU EVIL REVIEWERS!! Teeta!!!! Thanks for the chappie!!!!! awsome!!!!! HUGS!!!!! I got my sugar finally and I am bouncing off the wall and have no clue of what to write!!!!!! because I already told you!!!!! ~~~~suuuuugar ruuuuuuuuuush!!!~~~~ OK, you have definitely joined the dark side of evil cliffie producers! Loved it, loved them, loved... ah yeah... I already said that... I swear that cake had too much sugar!!!! OK the story is developing awsomely!! I know you got a few hundred more tricks under your sleeve... so I can't wait to see them pop out somewhere! muahaha... HUGS!!! ~~~decaffeined coke sucked big time!~~~

Laaerie!

Ok... so Teeta tells me... you're the second to review this one chapter... so here's to redeem to my inability to count!
I'm the third!
Laaerie

Oh my god. Oh. My. God!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot believe Rane said that. I cannot believe Rane said that. I am in shock...................alright. okay. I can talk now.........YOU ARE AWESOME! XD Shawn. is. going. to. freak! Please post the next chapter soon!? Please? Although I know you have to write it, so....*sighs dramatically*...oh well, I shall wait! XD ..........(YAY! hot and steamy chapters with Shawn........^_^) by the way, in this chapter, I loved this line: "But that kiss was just a touch of two surfaces, no feelings on either side". I thought it was amazing! Anyway, see you next time! ^_^
-Dee

Great, great chapter ! As usual ! What TALENT for "tortured" your fans !!!
I wonder if Ran is really sincere... He betrays Uri's trust !! I hope Uri kick his ass... Or even better I hope Shawn do it !!!!

Another great chapter! Weird about the song...:oP I didn't even know there was a Marilyn Manson version! I've only ever heard the version by The Cure. I'll have to look up the Marilyn Manson one. True, I just hope the poor thing doesn't have too many more throwing up episodes. Though with the end of this chapter, another trip to visit the toilet will probably be soon in coming! :oD

By the way, I can't remember whether I said this before, but you make really good use of the present tense for your verbs. I've attempted that a few times, but I really can only do the past well and not switch back and forth.

Even though I can't say I wish for Uri to be tortured, I have to admit I was laughing through half of this chapter. The poor kid is adorable, but so naive! :oP I like Rane a lot, but I don't know...I really wonder about his reasoning. I mean, at least he's already said that their "dating" relationship has ulterior motives, but it seems like there are some ulterior ulterior motives...Ha ha, that sentence made me laugh...Anyway, moving along. Ah, a man that can cook! That's always a plus. Ah, but that was kind of low that he introduced himself as Uri's boyfriend. I guess Uri never said not to tell, but he did say that he hadn't told his parents yet. So, as I said earlier, another great chapter! Can't wait to get to the next one and see Shawn's reaction!

How....HOWWWWW.... HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEE!

T.T This is horrible! JUST HORRIBLE! I thought the last one was bad but this... just isnt fair!

Twist after twist man! I wonder what this debt is that Rane keeps blabbering about and even though I was keen on Uri and Rane dating-dating, I actually like this idea of them being friends and helping eachother out. It's rather sweet - Though I believe my jaw dropped with Uri at the last line. What's with you and these cliffhangers?!?!?! I can't even begin to imagine Shawn's reaction.