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woah~ nice~
i like ur plot and how it's going~
hope u update soon~~ ^^

OMG CLIFFIE!
u mean person you lol
I love this story is one of the best i've read on this site. not cliche or anythign is an actual
story and i love real stories :-) Keep it up i cant w8 to read the next chapppie, OMG SHAUNS
REACTION! OMFG PARENTS REACTION OMG OMG OMG! i need to calm down got any coffe? lol Gr8 story! LOVES IT!

This update was amazing! I've been reading this story since the beginning but this is the first time that I have actually reviewe. Sorry about that. Usually I'm one of those silent readers, the ones who will read the entire story but never review. I've been with you every step of the way, and I just love this story to pieces. Its obvious that Shawn has feelings for oblivious Uri, and I don't think that the two are real brothers from the reaction had by the mother in that long ago chapter. Uri said something along the lines of them not being real brothers and she just panicked. I've been suspicious ever since. Also, I think that Shawn is gay and that he came out to his parents and gradparents, going by that scene when Uri mentioned girlfriends. Sorry, I'm just catching up on my comments. I think Rane would be a good transition period for Uri to experience before he goes about anything else concerning his brother. The poor kid is so terrified though, I don't that's going to happen for a while yet. Something is definitely up with Rane, what's this debt that he's has to repay. It's making me curious. I wanted to die with the way you left off this chapter, I hate cliff-hangers! Anyway, it'll be interesting to see what Shawn and Uri's reactions will be to Rane's statement. It was hilarious the way he just came out and said it though; you did not expect him to say that all. WOW! I've been rambling for a while now, Sorry!. I just want to say that you are doing fabulous with this story and to keep up the good work. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

X3 Squee! This is coming along great. <3 <3

OMG!!!! you are so evil! You and your major cliffhangers! Update soon, I'm dying of suspense.

There is nooo fucking way you just left the story like that. Especially since it takes you goddamn near forever to update now. I've been reading since the begining and now I'm just getting fed up. It's such a good story! I don't likeee waiting two weeks for an update. I'm afraid I'm just going to end up forgetting about the story and never know the ending. PLEASE hurry with the update.

*squees* Another cliff hanger! OMFG

You pick the most perfect places to leave off too~! Oh my goodness, I must update mine now~! After I'm done fangirling over yours~!

Omigod. I have just sat here and read your entire story in one sitting.

I. Love. You.

Seriously, I never ever ever review. And you've made me want to. Your story is AMAZING. But oh man, that last cliffhanger has me in this very odd state. I'm all at once giddy, freaking out, and pissed off. It's like, "YES! THAT WAS BRILLIANT! Wait! Shawn's gonna FLIP! RANE, how COULD you? DX HEY! WHEN DO I KNOW WHAT HAPPENNSSS???" So you see, I need severe therapy...

I think my favorite character so far has to be Shawn. So I will be very sad if he doesn't get his snuggles with Uri. Not that I'm threatening to flame you terribly if you don't have them end up together or anything. *Whistles nonchalantly and hides flamer's pitchfork behind back* Nah, seriously. I'd be disappointed, but I doubt I could be really upset by however your story turns out- you've done it so masterfully so far!

I do like Rane, though, despite the fact that he makes me a little suspicious. I know he's already expressed his ulterior motives, but I've got the feeling that maybe he's not telling all of them.

I know it can take a while to write new stuff, but could you please hurry it along just a liiittle? Pretty please with a cherry on top? =D

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*kill cliffhangers*

:D Hi! Started reading your story today.*screams in frustration* I'm totally hooked up, Great work!

chapter 5

wow! your writing has improved alot! and the beta you have now probably helps a whole lot! and how dare he go on a date with a girl! T_T its so sad how the brothers both have feelings for eachother and yet they cant tell eachother just yet!

some errors i found:

I do but not this way so telling her - should be - I do, but not this way, so telling her
probably they wouldn't - should be they probably wouldn't
Shawn enters the room again and comes closer to bed - should be - Shawn enters the room again comes closer to 'the' bed
probably you've already noticed - should be - you've probably already noticed