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Chapter 19 - OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! DID HE? YEAH, HE DID! Oh, holy shit! He said that HE IS URI'S BOYFRIEND to SHAWN! OF ALL PEOPLE! Omigawd. Shawn is going to be so jealous! I can't wait! I mean..umm...poor Shawn! That must suck. I like Rane. A lot. But I dunno. That whole 'being with him makes me not think of Shawn' thing makes me sad. Oh well. The ending was great.

Wonderful! I think that I may fall in love with Uri... And umm... I wanted to ask about something stupid... Uri's name is German? It sounds German to me. And one more thing: Uri has blue eyes and blonde hair or it's only my imagination? I think that I should read everything one more time:) he he I will of course I will:) It will become my biblie.

Oh, My Sweet GOD!!! I need to breath!.... Now, first I have to state that I love you and your muse!
Shawn will turn outrageous, or will be so shoked, that he can't say a word. But still, maybe now he will know that his little brother is gay. Maybe he'll make the first real step... or not. But still, Uri is out. Even if he never wanted to tell his brother.
Now I will have to check for the update minimum 2 times a day. Please hurry up with the update, or I'm going to die!!!! Anyway, thanks for the chapter! *hugs you*

You made me scream, again. ;D I feel sooooo bad for Shawn! T_T What kind of debt does Rane have to pay off... hmmm?

Shawn's anger and protectiveness was awesome, btw. Plus, I LOVED where you left it. Cliffhangers are so exciting, even if this one makes me cry. (I am NOT encouraging you to do this again, leave a cliffhanger like this, I may have a heart attack if you do.) I have a very weak heart... *puppy dog face* Please update soon!

Ne, ne, how long before you put up a new chapter. I work alot so it took me some time to get finished with the story so far, demo, I love it! It's great! It has everything a good story needs, great plot, really great interaction between the characters, and the emotional swings of a teenage boy learning about his sexuallity is dead on! I have a gay little brother, and growing up, even in a place as accepting as our home city, I watched him go through alot of what you are writting about. My little brother was the star of his track team, and my mother is a single parent, who was anything but accepting of homosexuality. So my little brother, and I (who is happily bi) grew up in fear of liking those of the same sex. Especially since those we were closest to always picked on us and made up feel anything but normal for our preferances in those of the same sex. It wasn't until both of us moved out of our house, my little brother to NY, me into my girlfriend's house, that my mother began to accept us for who we are. I really don't think that many realize just how stressful being gay or bi can be, especially when you're a teenager. The confusion, fear, and self hatred are the worst parts. I can remember many times thowing up, and unable to eat because of how I felt. Many people write stories about being gay or bi, and they make it seem that it isn't a hard transistion. The truth is, it's not that easy, especially when brought up under the thought that it's wrong and a sin to love some one of the same sex. The pain it causes, you can be nearly unbarible, and you always worry about hurting or dissapointing those you love when you tell them, or fear they will hate you. The title of being gay is more accepted now then it was when I was growing up, but it still makes you stand out among others. I was always one that didn't like to stand out among a crowd, so when my family found out it was bad for me. My straight brothers made sure that everyone new that I liked girls, and that my little brother liked guys. We both lost many friends, and were very greatful for those that stuck around. We stent many nights talking and crying over the pain we were suffering because we just wanted to ourselves. Being a year apart we spent alot of time together, and not all of it was pleasant. Looking back on it now though, if we weren't there for ech other, even with our few close friends still by our sides, we probably would have caved under the pressure. Have someone that is close to you, and truely understand how you feel is the best thing when you're learning to find yourself, and break away from the setting you born into. So thank you for making your story more based on reality, and I look forward to reading more it very so soon. *Bows* Arigato.

~~Kitsune

OH MY GOD.

WHY!?

That was a horrible cliffhanger. Dx Horrible.

But I loved it none-of-the-less. =D

YAY! thankies for the update! Keep 'em coming! (no pun intended) I want to see how Shawn reacts to Uri's "boyfriend". but yay! it's great to meet another loveless fan! It is one of my most favorite animes! though the ending to the anime sucked (though I did almost cry, i was confused...). I won't tell you if you haven't seen it. And if you haven't you can always go on youtube and see the episodes. I love Ritsuka!!! =^__^=

O_O Oh my Gad!!!! >_< Tha twas wonderful! Rane is uri's bf! And Sahwn is totally pissed! I could not have asked for a better chapter. i love you, I really do. Marry me! Marry me please! *Wait ....I am not a guy 0_0* Uhm ... okay that was weird. heh. but seriously, you make my day! I have been waiting for a chapter from you for oh so very long, and now it is here. And URI HAS A BOYFRIEND!!!!!! I think Rane is starting to grow on me. Though I still love Shawn. *He is my f*** buddy! XD* Shawn ... he must be crused, the poor guy. I felt a twinge in my heart when I read that last sentence. I could just picture the hurt and confused look in Shawn's green eyes. Tears .... his tears will create a new ocean. I like Rane and all, but Shawn ... he is, just too good of a guy to not get the one he loves. Uri, please see the love he holds for you and go with your damned instincts! AHH!!! I love them all. I love your work. I love your chapters. I love you 0_0 XD Yay! *okay, I have gone crazy now, need to get back to updating my own stories* I can't wait ... and I truly mean that I can NOT wait until the next chapter. I swear this is a freaken soap opera! XD But, I can't get enough of your tempting posion.


Love your ... new wife? Or husband. *girls and girls, guys dig that!* 0_0 JadenLeeFaye. XD!!!!!! Hahahaahhhaaaa *oh I am sooo crazy!*

LOL OMG Cliffie1 Even bigger than the last one... gosh Uri, and OMG Rane, and now their dating, and even Kyles afraid of Rane thats gotta be something... I reeeeealllllly wanna see how Shawn reacts to all this... its gonna be so interesting... and hopefully sweet... Don't leave us hanging for too long! :D

oh wow Teeta, you again managed to pull me completely into this world of your characters and I loved every second I spend reading it! Rane is really cool and I like him very much, and then there is Shaw who I also love and both of them can't have Uri, so one of them will be very dissapointed in the end and for that one I will feel sorry for and I'll also joy for the one who he will end up with.

I wonder about that history between Rane and Kyle; what really happened there and Uri really needs Rane's protection because Kyle means no good, that's for sure. Lurking in dark corridors and all that!

And now Shawn saw Rane and heard that... That last line; what a cliffy, you just love cliffy's, don't you? ;) But then again so do I, but this really has me wanting more, so be prepared to some serious messenger bugging on my part, lol.

Brilliant chapter as always! *huggs*