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and uri is not blond, is he?????

and why does everyone think shawn is gonna freak over that.....if he does then it will be a silent freak out....
that's maybe 'cause I don't want rane and shawn fighting and that's partly because I DO like rane better (hardly any shawn in the last few chapters, so how am I supposed to like him better...still like him though), but also because I think if shawn hits rane or something then uri would either break up with rane or stick with him and distance himself from shawn....the first would make no sense, because setting them up just to part them again would get the story nowhere....rane is more important than that....at least that's what I would like to think...
and uri being angry with shawn....no....they just restored their "relationship" and there was so much uri-and-shawn-avoinding-each-other in this story that it's quite enough for a while....shawn freaking would also mean that he would question uri about his reasons and sexuality and then uri either lies or tells the truth.....it's just too early for that....
no, I vote for shawn pulls himself together and frets in silence or something other than freaking...and he's gonna be hurt at the fact that uri kept his sexuality from him....
but also shawn got the hots for his brother (or I like to think that they're cousins, since shawn could always be the son of the previously mentioned dead aunt....) and now that he knows that uri is at least bi, I think he's gonna tip toe around him, trying to tame his inner desire....or stuff...
or maybe he goes for slowly winning uris heart...
like flirting with him while pretending that he is totally okay with rane...
god, I can think of a thousand things, but shawn and rane fighting is not included...
but you are the author...
(and that was the fifth review on this chapter, wasn't it.....)

Wow, I love your story so far! It's really good, and you portray the emotions so powerfully!
A question though - the school uniforn is amazing, but the style is somehow un - Western, because it gives me the idea of East Asian uniforms.

This is the first time I've ever, ever reviewed a story, but yours is so fabulous that I can't help not reviewing it @@ Please keep on updating!! = ='

*gaspeh*

Half of Uri's secret is out! Kekekeke. Not much to say, other than the chapter was awesome and I can't wait for the next one and I wish you would write quicker because then I would be happier.

Nothing else. >.>

right teeta....
I decided to not only share my chocolate cake with you but my tuna sweetcorn pasta too.....so if you like unhealthy microweavefood, go for it. I'm addicted. sadly so.....
right....now I've got some clues on what's going on with rane....the phsycal attraction towards uri is missing and god....I should have figured that out.....I'm usually quite good in figuring things out before they actually happen, a thing that always spoils the best storys....the "yes I knew that2-effect.....which is missing here........lots of things missing...eh...
all in a good way, though
I mean...god....you actually managed to surprise me.......without getting unrealistic.....so.....congratulatiions.....that's some sort of a first und I'm still in awe....(in case you didn't notice...)
so...but to the actual chapter......my face turned red when rane kissed uri....and I was waving my hands like they were wings and I bet the squeaking sounds I made came very close to a chicken, too.....
and of course I hate you for the cliffhanger....that's soooooo mean....
other than that there is not much to say about it....I think useless ramblings about ranes reasons would be quite missplaced here....
so I'll just lean back and wait for the next chapter........
btw....where are you from.....I mean america is not schooluniform...I think never been there, so I'm just judging from teeniemovies and series.....but...rory in Gilmore Girls wears a uniform and that's an elite school....so.....american?......british....????
australian...do they have uniforms....

right....a really stupid thing to do is to actually review on other reviews.....
but I just like to read them to know how other people reacted to the story....
and somebody up there suggested that uri might be a german name and well I am german and NO.....it is not....actually if I would name my son uri people would most likely havwe a problem with it....wouldn't keep me from doing so, but that's not the point...
the point is that uri is not german but short form of uriel, angle of the earth....four elements and stuff...michael fire, uriel earth and shit...I can't remember wind and water....have read some angel sanctuary again...it's been a while......
but I bet you know all of it, so telling you is not the point either...
the point is that I can't shout up and should get a life...
and that I wanted to say that the chicken thing is positive....very...
(I'm a big rane fan, but I already mentioned that....but I like shawn just as much....only in a different way...and now go and write scene with uri looking at rane for a long time, because I want a better pysical describtion....and I wanna know his real hair color)

raziel.....wind angel???
I'm not sure

I almost feel like crying- that was soo mean. Oh well, guess we'll find out eventually. Hopefully eventually is soon though. And Rane is such a character. Never know what that boy's gonna do next. I can't wait for the next chapter- Seriously. Its killing me. Okay maybe not that big of an obsession but big enough to nag at me so that I check back every half hour for the next three days. I love your writing and the way you play out the suspense so well only to lead to nowhere except one more piece of the puzzle.

OMG! i swear the story just keeps getting better and better. and those cliffhangers kill me! but yeah you're an excellent writer. XD

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


How could you leave such a cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs*

please please please please update soon *pouts*