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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:lol: First of all, I`m sure your smut scenes are going to be absolutely delicious... any scene like that coming soon? *grin*
Now, on to the review.
Rane is so mysterious. He won`t say why and how he knows Kyle. And I don`t buy it for one minute that his only reason is to ditch Sandy. I know he must like Uri, in some way (sexually is one of those ways :P ) And he is sooo cute, acting cool and collected, being the knight in shinning armor, ready to come to Uri`s rescue when big, bad, scary Kyle shows up LOL
Sandy is the exact prototype of the mindless blonde, out to catch herself a cute stud to boast with in front of everyone. I`m glad Rane wants to get ride of her. He is far too smart to be hanging around with someone like that. But, alas, I fear Sandy is not going to slip silently into the night LOL I can just see her concocting some evil and perverse plan to get back at both Rane. And at Uri when she hears those two are going out. Even more so after she understand she was dumped for a guy. That cannot be good for her reputation. She is TROUBLE.
ROFL Loved the kiss Rane gave Uri right in front of Kyle. That will definitely piss him off. Just great. More trouble for Uri... Like Sandy wasn`t enough! *rolls eyes*
Dane doesn`t seem to be very happy about Uri`s new made friend. I think he`s cute, worrying over Uri so much and trying to protect. He`s a good friend. I wonder how everyone will react to see two opposites brought together? Uri (shy and unnoticed) and Rane (super cute jock). A Must see! (so hurry up and write!!!!!!!!!)
Somehow I knew Rane would the kind of guy that is filthy rich and yet unaffected by it, combining nicely his personal style with his family`s money. The fact that he is a cook is even better as he and Uri will have more to talk about. Not that I expect them to sit around the kitchen table and swap recipes LOL Rane just has so many different characteristics, others than you would expect for a jock. That makes him ubber cute!!! :P And I like that he tries to be supportive, ready to offer his advice or help if Uri should need it.
And last but not least. Definitely not least XD THE INTRODUCTION!!! Rane coming up to Shawn and giving the blow: Uri`s boyfriend. I was on the floor laughing at this one. I could just see poor Uri, mouth agape, mind frozen as Rane just turned his world completely upside down. He no longer has problems only at school. But at home too... How are things going to progress? What is Uri going to do from now on?
HOW is Shawn going to react to what Rane said? How is he going to behave in front of Uri? Damn... that was a MEAN cliffhanger. I hate you for stopping just there, Teeta.
WRITE GOD DAMN FASTER! I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now, on to the review.
Rane is so mysterious. He won`t say why and how he knows Kyle. And I don`t buy it for one minute that his only reason is to ditch Sandy. I know he must like Uri, in some way (sexually is one of those ways :P ) And he is sooo cute, acting cool and collected, being the knight in shinning armor, ready to come to Uri`s rescue when big, bad, scary Kyle shows up LOL
Sandy is the exact prototype of the mindless blonde, out to catch herself a cute stud to boast with in front of everyone. I`m glad Rane wants to get ride of her. He is far too smart to be hanging around with someone like that. But, alas, I fear Sandy is not going to slip silently into the night LOL I can just see her concocting some evil and perverse plan to get back at both Rane. And at Uri when she hears those two are going out. Even more so after she understand she was dumped for a guy. That cannot be good for her reputation. She is TROUBLE.
ROFL Loved the kiss Rane gave Uri right in front of Kyle. That will definitely piss him off. Just great. More trouble for Uri... Like Sandy wasn`t enough! *rolls eyes*
Dane doesn`t seem to be very happy about Uri`s new made friend. I think he`s cute, worrying over Uri so much and trying to protect. He`s a good friend. I wonder how everyone will react to see two opposites brought together? Uri (shy and unnoticed) and Rane (super cute jock). A Must see! (so hurry up and write!!!!!!!!!)
Somehow I knew Rane would the kind of guy that is filthy rich and yet unaffected by it, combining nicely his personal style with his family`s money. The fact that he is a cook is even better as he and Uri will have more to talk about. Not that I expect them to sit around the kitchen table and swap recipes LOL Rane just has so many different characteristics, others than you would expect for a jock. That makes him ubber cute!!! :P And I like that he tries to be supportive, ready to offer his advice or help if Uri should need it.
And last but not least. Definitely not least XD THE INTRODUCTION!!! Rane coming up to Shawn and giving the blow: Uri`s boyfriend. I was on the floor laughing at this one. I could just see poor Uri, mouth agape, mind frozen as Rane just turned his world completely upside down. He no longer has problems only at school. But at home too... How are things going to progress? What is Uri going to do from now on?
HOW is Shawn going to react to what Rane said? How is he going to behave in front of Uri? Damn... that was a MEAN cliffhanger. I hate you for stopping just there, Teeta.
WRITE GOD DAMN FASTER! I BEG YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cliff hanger.... A FREAKING CLIFF HANGER?!?!
wah you meanie. now i'm stuck with my over active imagination creating crack-filled scenarios(sp?). i first discovered this on laaerie's site and imagine my surprise when i found it here with 14 more chappies. i was scambling for an excuse when my room mate opened the door to figure out why i squealed. it was a really loud and high-pitched-happy-filled-jump-around-like-a-maniac squeal.
i have so many questions. from uri mom's reaction i'm assuming he and shawn aren't related. and if they're not who's the adopted one? I vote on uri. and another question, is he related to nancy by any chance. i might be totally off my mark but i've got the weirdest feeling somehow. ugg i hate it when this happens. and oh god kyle! *snickers* i feel sorry for him, bitten tounges and bruised shins are so not fun. i do not like uri losing his first kiss to that jerk. if he loses anything else to someone other than shawn you are going to have a lot of raving lunatic reviews on your hands.*runs from the whitecoats holding very suspicious-looking needles*
now back to where i started. a cliffy, of all things why now?! and i feel pity for uri. you drag him through so many things. poor little girly boy.(i wish he had long hair. maybe he can now, since everyone thinks/knows he's gay. pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssee. *gives a very convincing kicked-puppy look*) and my oh my how bold rane is. i hope shawn doesn't punch him. maybe rane can win him over with his godlike cooking skills.
i know i'm forgeting to comment on a warehouse-full of things but i'm too tired right now so i'll just come back later and review again! now i'm addicted to this story. oh well, there's nothing i can do about it.
wah you meanie. now i'm stuck with my over active imagination creating crack-filled scenarios(sp?). i first discovered this on laaerie's site and imagine my surprise when i found it here with 14 more chappies. i was scambling for an excuse when my room mate opened the door to figure out why i squealed. it was a really loud and high-pitched-happy-filled-jump-around-like-a-maniac squeal.
i have so many questions. from uri mom's reaction i'm assuming he and shawn aren't related. and if they're not who's the adopted one? I vote on uri. and another question, is he related to nancy by any chance. i might be totally off my mark but i've got the weirdest feeling somehow. ugg i hate it when this happens. and oh god kyle! *snickers* i feel sorry for him, bitten tounges and bruised shins are so not fun. i do not like uri losing his first kiss to that jerk. if he loses anything else to someone other than shawn you are going to have a lot of raving lunatic reviews on your hands.*runs from the whitecoats holding very suspicious-looking needles*
now back to where i started. a cliffy, of all things why now?! and i feel pity for uri. you drag him through so many things. poor little girly boy.(i wish he had long hair. maybe he can now, since everyone thinks/knows he's gay. pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssee. *gives a very convincing kicked-puppy look*) and my oh my how bold rane is. i hope shawn doesn't punch him. maybe rane can win him over with his godlike cooking skills.
i know i'm forgeting to comment on a warehouse-full of things but i'm too tired right now so i'll just come back later and review again! now i'm addicted to this story. oh well, there's nothing i can do about it.
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story... I hope the next chapter comes soon because I'm dying to know what will happen next...
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Teeta! I love you, I love you soooo freaking much! *huggles* This entire chapter--I tell you--it's probably my favorite so far! It was just so freaking awesome! I'm crying from laughing so hard. I love that ending (then again, when don't I love and adore your endings? They're all so perfect!). I can't wait to find out just what Shawn's reaction will be in the next chapter because, honestly, the tension between Shawn and Rane is making me very giddy. Poor Uri. I think that he just came out sooner than he wanted to. ^^
Are you a fellow Axie lover as well? No wonder why Rane is so easy to love. Too bad there isn't a Roxie around for him to huggle (or is there?). ;P
Are you a fellow Axie lover as well? No wonder why Rane is so easy to love. Too bad there isn't a Roxie around for him to huggle (or is there?). ;P
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah this story is friggen awesome, update soon? I love it!
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
No I want Uri to be with Shawn, I hate Rane (cries)
Lol, shawns gonna flip out big time isn't he, I mean he's started but that's just the tip of the iceberg I can see him ignoring Uri for a while, being extrodinarily pissy, perhaps getting drunk, sleeping around, maybe with guys that look suspiciously like Uri and just a lot of angst to come,
They will end up together though right??????
Thanks for the update I really love this fic,
Nikki
xxx
No I want Uri to be with Shawn, I hate Rane (cries)
Lol, shawns gonna flip out big time isn't he, I mean he's started but that's just the tip of the iceberg I can see him ignoring Uri for a while, being extrodinarily pissy, perhaps getting drunk, sleeping around, maybe with guys that look suspiciously like Uri and just a lot of angst to come,
They will end up together though right??????
Thanks for the update I really love this fic,
Nikki
xxx
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you realise you’ve ended two successive chapters with the word ‘Boyfriend’? And both times it was Rane saying it? Don’t know why I’m pointing that out, but it sorta makes it feel like a circle, or a wheel, spinning on but coming back to a similar place.
Anyway, I like Rane better now. I think it’s because he isn’t that interested in Uri, though whether it’s because I think Uri’s Shawn’s property or because Rane feels shady and now Uri’s safe from his (doubtless) perverted schemes, is unclear.
I can’t wait to see Shawn’s reaction. Is he gonna be mad; accepting; will he stand there for the rest of the night with a brain meltdown? Will it be fake; will he go tell their parents; will he hit Rane on reflex? Or will he be very quiet as he tries to decide if it’s a good thing or a bad thing. Who knows? You; and you will share, won’t you?
I was wondering where you’re gonna end this fic. Will it be when (if?) Shawn and Uri get together, or will it be once they adapt to life as a couple? Will it be them falling in love with other people? I don’t want you to tell me (not that I think you would) I just wonder how long you have left. I want so much more of the fic and whilst you’re writing style insures that there is going to much more, I worry; will it be enough?
I probably sound really weird; I just woke up from dreaming I was in Raccon city and was able to transmute zombies like Ed from Full Metal Alchemist. Plus, I was King. All my subjects got abducted, but still, King is King. I had a horse and everything.
Once again, I adore this fic, so please keep writing! It has everything I want and more.
Anyway, I like Rane better now. I think it’s because he isn’t that interested in Uri, though whether it’s because I think Uri’s Shawn’s property or because Rane feels shady and now Uri’s safe from his (doubtless) perverted schemes, is unclear.
I can’t wait to see Shawn’s reaction. Is he gonna be mad; accepting; will he stand there for the rest of the night with a brain meltdown? Will it be fake; will he go tell their parents; will he hit Rane on reflex? Or will he be very quiet as he tries to decide if it’s a good thing or a bad thing. Who knows? You; and you will share, won’t you?
I was wondering where you’re gonna end this fic. Will it be when (if?) Shawn and Uri get together, or will it be once they adapt to life as a couple? Will it be them falling in love with other people? I don’t want you to tell me (not that I think you would) I just wonder how long you have left. I want so much more of the fic and whilst you’re writing style insures that there is going to much more, I worry; will it be enough?
I probably sound really weird; I just woke up from dreaming I was in Raccon city and was able to transmute zombies like Ed from Full Metal Alchemist. Plus, I was King. All my subjects got abducted, but still, King is King. I had a horse and everything.
Once again, I adore this fic, so please keep writing! It has everything I want and more.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the bomb hits hard ... dang that ... hectic ... very hectic ... I actually like Rane, even though he is using uri ... he was straight forward about it.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw jeez that was the worst (ie best) cliffhanger ever! arrg. oh i love this story!
if you were here and i had ice-cream, i would give it to you.
if you were here and i had ice-cream, i would give it to you.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Way to go Rane!! I have rarely seen such an excellent cliffy. You really know how to keep your readers on the edge of their chairs! Love it! Absolutely love it! Can’t wait to find out what happens now!
Rane sounds so perfect, almost too perfect to be real… except for the smoking part, and the secret. He is so self assured, so witty, so intelligent. And it seems he always knows exactly what he wants and what to do to get it. I was a little disappointed that he only wants Uri to be his boyfriend because it’s convenient for him, and not because he actually likes him… but I’ll get over it. It is kind of what Uri wanted to accomplish by dating Nancy, only Rane is honest about his motives. I really wonder what secret he hides though. I hope Uri finds out. I hope that at least something happens in their ‘relationship’. They ‘re not really in love but… they could practice some useful moves right? (Yea, I’m a perv! I need smut. If you don’t do it I’m going to write a sappy fanfic!)
Just kidding. Lol. Aah poor Shawn, what will he do. Your sweet innocent brother has a jock for a boyfriend. Fall on your knees and weep, for another man woos the boy you want for yourself! Let rage consume you! Can this dude be trusted? Perhaps you should stalk him to see what he’s up to. He may break your poor brother’s fragile heart! Be consumed by jealousy! Because YOU can’t have him! (yet)
Hehe, bring on the drama XD
Rane sounds so perfect, almost too perfect to be real… except for the smoking part, and the secret. He is so self assured, so witty, so intelligent. And it seems he always knows exactly what he wants and what to do to get it. I was a little disappointed that he only wants Uri to be his boyfriend because it’s convenient for him, and not because he actually likes him… but I’ll get over it. It is kind of what Uri wanted to accomplish by dating Nancy, only Rane is honest about his motives. I really wonder what secret he hides though. I hope Uri finds out. I hope that at least something happens in their ‘relationship’. They ‘re not really in love but… they could practice some useful moves right? (Yea, I’m a perv! I need smut. If you don’t do it I’m going to write a sappy fanfic!)
Just kidding. Lol. Aah poor Shawn, what will he do. Your sweet innocent brother has a jock for a boyfriend. Fall on your knees and weep, for another man woos the boy you want for yourself! Let rage consume you! Can this dude be trusted? Perhaps you should stalk him to see what he’s up to. He may break your poor brother’s fragile heart! Be consumed by jealousy! Because YOU can’t have him! (yet)
Hehe, bring on the drama XD