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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person LJ
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a very loud scream that I screamed with the last chapter, but I LOVED this chapter. Shawn is making a move on him, Shawn is making a move on him! *Dances*

Yay! Shawn is going to make a move on Uri, yes he is!

... I still want to know about that debt, since either Shawn doesn't know Rane or he's hiding it rather well. =D

UPDATE SOON, PLEASE, I'M BEGGING YOU! T_T

LOVE (and impatiently),

LJ
person Laaerie
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK... I know how much you work on answering all the reviews and all... so here's my review...*cries* so late... you already know why... but muaha!!!! everything still according to plan here... mighty hcappie, and waiting for much more MUCH MORE!!! GIMME!!! you better be moving your little fingers now!!! HUGS!!

Laaerie
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again: Awesome chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Rane is such a smartass, I love him!
person elyn
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! Hmmm...do you like chocolate? I only ask because I have several friends who can't stand it and I make sure to tell them how strange they are on a regular basis, but anyway, just wanted to give you a nice big chocolate chip cookie for giving us another chapter! That and the fact that I'm hungry right now, so I might as well have some imaginary food and share it, too! :o)

Hee hee, how I love dramatic irony. Unless I'm totally reading this wrong, *taunts* Uriiii, we know something you don't know! Na na nananaaa! *sticks out tongue* Aww, I think Shawn is just adorable. And Rane...well, after his earlier stunt he went down a couple of notches on my "eligible bachelors for Uri" measuring stick, but now he's back up. Almost. If he pulls another surprise attack like the kiss...well, maybe Uri needs some shock therapy after all! :oP I hope Uri's friends are able to handle the revelation. Did I notice some deeper tension with Dan? Or do I just want everyone in this story to like boys? ;o)

Yeah, I think we all just get used to writing in a certain tense and stick with it. I should try to branch out a bit myself. It is hard to stay in the same tense throughout when you use one you're not as fluent with, but that's why there's other people to read the stories! :o)

Can't wait to see more!
person shadow
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* i want more....i think im addicted to your story
person Sekre
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! No cliffie xP Torture device it is.

Wow, a lot happened in this chapter ... Like I can see the wheels movin! What's shawn going to do? Rane? Dan? Nate??? Poor Uri.
person kubomi
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know i've said it before, but I love love love Love LOVE this story!
It's so sad that Dan is so mean to Uri! I hope that they work things out and become friends again, or are you going to torture us some more?
Here's hoping for another chapter really soon!!
person miles
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"You'll be the first one to know"... Can't wait !!
Ran is really a jerk ! I want to "punch" him ! GGRRR
person k-girl
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man! What a way for a entire school to find out you are gay! lOVE THIS STORY, KEEP UPDATING PLEASE!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Uri. Although I'm not so sure yet that Dan's a homophobe. To me he just sounded angry that Uri had kept it from him. Ok, I can't WAIT for the Uri/Shawn lovin to happen!!!! When will that be happening???? hee hee. PLEASE update soon!!! I can't WAIT for more!!!!!