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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person kleoolxD
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is AWESOME. I really love it. Can't wait the next chapter ( argh, I'm too impatient). Good luck with writing *grins*
person mw0627
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shawn needs to man up and get better, poor Uri....
person Ciar
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say: yay!
person miles
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally ! Shawn goes out his depression ! All along this chapter, I wanted him to talk, crie or something ! Poor Uri, the wait is really hard !
And thank you for this new chapter ! It's very long and complete ! Thanks for sharing !
person Janie
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love love love every bit of this story! I'm still not understanding why Shawn is the one so wrecked though when he's the one that hurt Uri. The mystery of it is killing me!
I know it's going to be while, but I'm so stoked for the next chapter!!!! :D
person Taizha
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. WHAT THE FUCK IS HE DOING?!?! Just talk to Shawn! ACK! Death! This is like eating me up inside! Damn it. I want to hit my head on the wall or something. This is like the perfect depiction of human miss communication! And poor Shawn, and shit like that happens all the time. You my friend are brilliant beyond the human psyche. Like I have said before. This should be a damn book and you should get paid for this! PAID DAMN IT!
person mw0627
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are so nice with your giant chapters that are far longer than anyone else. And I love your story. So please update for me soon ;_; lots of love to you.
person Yuu22
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You....YOu.... you.... YOU EVIL GENIUS!!!! HOW DARE YOU LEFT US LIKE THAT???? I LOVE YOU!!!! AND YOUR STORY!!! I thought i was going to hate the 'cousin' Shawn, now i just love him even more??? Is Rane going to be with Uri? The tittle is 'not supposed to' and if Shawn and uri is not meant to be together, I'm sure Rane would take him... uhhh But I want Uri to be with shawn soooo bad!!! Please keep up the good work! It's okay if you don't update regulary, as long as the chapters are LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!!!

c'ya!!!
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey please update soon!!! I can't wait to see what will happen next!!! Don't prolong the suspense.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually cried T-T, that was a really good chapter, there was a long wait on it but I've decided it was worth it! I look forward to reading the next chapter.