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huggles n wub

love the story i wait and every second.. makes me want to nail u to a keyboard.. lol
geez u are such a tease. but gotta love ya.

lol
your eternal friend,
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oh it's been a long time! but I'm always here! I've found finally some time to read your chapters!
and I was sure that Rane will come as an obstacle between Uri and Shawn...I was expecting it! hurrah for me!
uri's imagination about this kiss was really well-done...so when will occur the true one?

Happy Easter to u to! If u really want to make me happy, update more. by the way the chapter was great and i can't wait till the next one.

Hello! Glad to see another chapter! I was reading through some of your review replies, and I just wanted to comment on the part where you said that it was moving slowly. Well...I have to admit that a few times I was like, awww, come on, get to the action!! But of course, that's the fun of reading! And life! You can't change the speed, and if the action (any action, whether it's action action or sex action or whatever) comes too early, then you're disappointed because it seems not quite so exciting. The anticipation is definitely building for Uri to finally figure out what is going on with all of these guys in his life, and I think it's a perfect speed if it has me slightly frustrated. The point is not instant gratification, and I really like that you take your time building up, even if I would love to push it along sometimes because I'm very impatient. You will never lose me as a reader, I have to say (though there was probably never any fear of that! :P), even if you go even more slowly than you are right now. And this is not a criticism of anyone who thinks it is going too slowly because we are all welcome to our own opinions and tastes.

Okay, now on to my own review. Hee hee, Uri got his first *real* kiss!! Yay! :D That was fun. Yes, Rane did go up on my scale of eligible bachelors, because manipulative can be sexy. However, it would get annoying after a while. He's still up there, though, because he's a good kisser. :P Yep, totally blind. It's so cute how Shawn keeps doing the things Uri tells him to do for the one he loves, while trying to be sneaky. I have to admit I'm pretty oblivious to things that happen to me, but I think even I would have noticed something by now!! ;) It's okay, Uri, we'll forgive you since you're cute. And here's a white chocolate macadamia nut cookie for you! Gosh, I want a cookie...:P Can't wait for more!

Oh, and happy Easter! :D

Oh oh ! poor Shawn! jealous?

oh the innuendos! and I'm mad that uri likes Rane's kiss. it feels like a betrayal towards Shawn!
and I certainly prefer the chapters where we feel more ShawnxUri interactions!

you too you're late with your reading...phew! I'm not the only one!
see you later! with the next chapter!

Love this chapter ! It's one of your best, I think ! It's very cute and there's a lot of "moves" !! At school and at home ! REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER... ^_^

Hi!
I love this chapter. Hopefully Dan And Uri start talking again and when is this "girl" finally going to be revealed? Keep up the great writing.

Hi!
I love this chapter. Hopefully Dan And Uri start talking again and when is this "girl" finally going to be revealed? Keep up the great writing. Happy Easter!