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I am SO angry. I read this chapter, pressed the review button, and my internet connection DIED. I haven't been able to review until now. >_< *Munches dejectedly on chocolate Easter bunny*

Clem is interesting. Kind of scary, but I like her. I will like her more if she continues to make Uri feel better about his sexuality. And Nate's back, I see. =D It's nice to see so many people on Uri's support team.

Kyle is still GROSS. EWWW.

That kiss was HOT. Seriously. And Rane's pretty smart, for a "jock". Uri is definitely right to worry about crossing him. Foreshadowing? I sense a Rane/Shawn conflict in the possible future. It's pretty interesting that Rane was partially spiting him... he's got the instincts of an animal, he can tell something is weird with Shawn! Tehee. =P

Is Uri going to tell his parents? I'm willing to bet he isn't. For one, Uri isn't much for sharing this stuff. For another, that would definitely make it hard to keep secret from Shawn. And Uri is sooo adamant about Shawn being kept in the dark.

Shawn and Uri were extraordinarily cute at the end. Must resist urge to cuddle! I think I had a fluff overdose when Shawn said he loved him. I wonder if Uri will mentally freak out and torture himself for taking those words the wrong way...

I was happy to defend your story! ^^ And I'll do it again, if need be. Wow, geez, look how long this review has gotten! I'd better stop now. I hope your Easter was happy and your Monday was dry, and I'm looking forward to your next update! <3

In regards to Lee Russell's review:

Sean may be the original Irish spelling, but Shawn IS a valid name and DOES exist. My cousin is named Shawn, thank you very much. Hmph! *Not actually angry XD*

Ah Shawn is soo cute and sweet... I can't wait to read what happens when he finds out Rane really is Uri's boyfriend. I feel sorry for him already. He may have to put up a fight for Uri's love in the end.

I loved the kiss with Rane. It made my teeth water, even though it was just a kiss. I wonder what secrets Rane is hiding... one thing is for sure though, he really did enjoy kissing Uri. ^^ Can't wait to read more of that *grin*

It's true I'm still sick and I have been a problem magnet these last weeks it seems., but I'm very sure you have nothing to do with it. Thank you for the wonderful update.

T_T OMG... THAT was the most beautiful first kiss I EVER... well, read about. It makes it even more difficult to see Rane only as part-time lover.
However... I LOVE the way Shawn gets more confident about the situation. And that cute kiss *meltsaway*
Keep it up, it's getting better and better. And I have to know what Kyle is up to...

I always think about what you could've done better... but there's nothing to critizise ^__^ Even the time I wait for the next chapter is like sharing Uri's confusion... though cliff hangers are the worst invention ever...

Wow, that kiss between Rane and Uri was intense! I'm glad to see that Shawn only has to lean close to Uri to get the same reaction that a deep kiss from Rane takes. :P

I'm curious as to what Rane was talking about when he was talking about when he mentioned Kyle's dad, though.

The fact that Nate's not rejecting Uri makes me pretty happy as well as the fact that Dan'll eventually return to being good friends with Uri again.

I like Clem. She's so cheerful and upbeat and I absolutely adore her attitude. To see someone who isn't radically against gays is a very good thing, indeed.

Don't worry, I'll be eager to see just what's going to happen when the tension blows up. A good dose of extra drama is never a bad thing. :D I'm especially looking forward to when Shawn just happens to discover that Uri's gay--I'm excited to see what you're going to do with that since Uri gets so panicked at the thought of his brother ever finding out about him. Hopefully it won't cause any fights between him and Uri's "official boyfriend". How Uri's parents react is another point of interest for me as well since they have such high expectations for him and everything.

FF pairings? You mean of all of the games? or just Final Fantasy VII? Umm... let's see... I'm your average SephxCloud fan, but my original pairing for VII is CloudxTifa (she rocks! XD). I also like VincentxCloud, CidxVincent, RudexReno, CloudxYuffie, CidxYuffie, and... hm... well, I can't think of any more for VII. I've never even come across a CloudxReno before. Do you have any recommendations for that pairing? For the other games... umm... SquallxSeifer, SquallxRinoa, SeiferxRinoa, ZellxSelphie, IrvinexSelphie, RaijinxFujin, and SeiferxFujin (FF8). ZidanexGarnet, VivixVivi (because he's just awesome like that XD), ZidanexVivi, KujaxZidane, and AmarantxFreya (FF9). TidusxYuna, WakkaxTidus, WakkaxLulu, TidusxRikku, JechtxAuron, WakkaxRikku, and (one of my very few yuri pairings) YunaxRikku (FFX). The pairings are pretty much the same for X-2 except the fact that I also like GippalxRikku, BaralaixRikku, and I have entertained the thought of BaralaixPaine as well. Admittedly, I haven't spent a whole lot of time reading FF fanfiction because I spend huge amounts of my time reading Naruto fanfiction. XD Maybe that's why my list for Naruto pairings is so much longer than this.

I'm such a freak, I know. I love pairings and it's a habit to pair characters up when I'm watching them interact. XD Anyway, sorry to bore you with my pairing list, teeta. I'm sure that you probably got bored in the middle of it. XP Can't wait for your next update teeta!

...Wish I could see Shawn's painting... *pout*

Wow, there was a lot in this chapter! Kyle and Rane(that part was fun XD;Uri's first kiss! ^_^ ; but what does Rane have on Kyle?) Have I ever told you that I love Shawn? Because I do. In a way, I want him and Uri to get together already, but in a way, I love all the tension between them. Mabye I'm a sadist at heart.XD I can't wait to read the modeling scene- I bet there isn't even an art project! Shawn just wants to paint him(naked? XD). And what's going on with Dan? Is he just mad because Uri didn't tell him he was gay, or is it something else?
Clem is awesome. FANGIRL POWER!
Yay, jealous Shawn!!!!!!
I love Shawn.
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By The Way: The mermaid thing was the first piece of smut you wrote?! It was sooooo good, too! Maybe you should write some Shawn/Uri smut for THIS story. *hint hint* lol.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-DEE

Oh I did enjoy chapter 21! Let me tell you I was fangirling so bad over the kiss Rane and Uri shared, I don't know who I want to be with Uri more: Rane or Shawn.

Things are getting more and more interesting by the minute~! Can't wait for the next update and hope to update my piece sooner rather than later! ^-^

Chapter 21 - Ho hum. "Your father will get it?" Porno tape, maybe? MAYBE? Maybe Rane and Kyle were together? Gasp. Oh, the possibilities! And Rane meeting the parents! Poor Shawn and his jealousy in the soon-to-be future. Shawn should ATLEAST tell Uri that 'she' is really a he. And then Uri can tell Shawn that he's gay. Or something. I dunno. Whatever. Update soon!

Chapter 21 cont. - I don't think I ummm well...explained what I meant correctly. I meant that Kyle fimled a sex tape OF HIM and another guy (possibly Rane) having sex. That sentence was kinda redundant. Cause, yeah, what else do you do in a SEX TAPE? Play Barbie? Eat play dough? Maybe in some homemade pornos. Who knows. Well, okay, that's it! Love your story!

Wowowow! This story is awesome!!!PLease continue! Pls pls pls! And good thing about ran! I prefer uri and shawn! =3 Love this story!!!