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omg cliffie!!!!!!! *glares at author* the next chapter better come soon

I've been following the story for a fiew months and i got really addicted to it :) It is beyond any expectations of mine. You are really good and keep doing it!
as for this chapter, it was really an unexpected thing the day dream :) and the "faint" was hilariour :)
i wonder what Shawn will do to Uri in his bed..

LOL OMG you can't leave us at such a critical point... I so thought the first day dream was real... and gosh Uris reaction after it, and Shawns concern... Gosh I wish they would be together already!!

ARGH!

You're so wicked!
I respect that.

This story is great...seeing an update makes me instantly happy...and means my boyfriend gets banished from the room with the computer in it...

I am EAGERLY awaiting the next update.

*hugs* you're great.

well! I am surprise!!! Great! Finally, some move from The lovely poor shy Shawn. There's no the end of it if he always scared to make a move and shoot Uri. The Great Dark Shawn. The Shawn that can't control himself! He....He....HE.... Good luck with your imagination, Uri. Good luck with your wicked story, Author. You're the best

actually..
i hate to be honest. but i know u too well teeta.
i started reading the first part and scrolled down to find the part where he wakes up from his dream.
i loved the chapter.
do uri and shawn have bunkbeds? that part confused me a little.
anyways. great chapter as always keep it up.
cant wait to see what happens next.
egg thing was gross.
lol although them being covered in it. and playing with each other was kind of hot:)
lol.
was a bit predictable.
because i know how much of a tease u are.
as if they are gonna have a sorrid kink scene when uri doesnt even know...geez
lol
anyways.
u def lose this bet
cause i wasn't surprised at all.
although i did think it was funny:)
-your loyal fan and friend,
ero

hello again! thanks for posting another chapter. I think this one was better than the last. my eyes were completely glued to it even though i have a short attention span =P but i must say that when uri was having the daydream i thought "please don't be a dream..." but it was a dayDREAM!!! GRRRRR!!! But i must say you made up for it with the whole erection thing, but i can't believe shawn didn't notice XD ah well, keep up the good work! i hope another chapter will be coming out asap. oh, i hope that they make a continuing anime series of loveless, it would suck if they just left it where it was. though i went on wikipedia to find out and i found some spoiler in the manga i wish i hadn't seen. gosh darn it!!! Y__Y anyway, thanks again for another chapter!! =D

You are evil you had going there for a second then WHAM! A cold slap in the face. X( DIdn't appreciate that though it was all nice and steamy and made me all hot and bothered. XD I'm such a perv. GOd you gotta update this is getting way too good. Anyways see ya.

Yay for an update! Brilliant as usual. Poor poor Uri, orgasming in front of his brother hehe. Kinda hard to hide something like that. Makes me wonder if Shawn was just playing dumb about it.

I am just absolutely loving this; this has just the perfect amount of smut + plot. I'm hoping so much that they get together! Thanks for writing!