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OOOOOO MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! I REALLY MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!! I MIGHT POKE MYSELF IN THE EYE!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

ME LIKEY. (>_<) HAHAH uri's so dense....I luv this fic!!!!!! <3!!!! the irony/situations are HILARIOUS.

While I was reading this smut-not-smut scene, as you call it, I had two thoughts running through my head: 1."Please don't be a dream.", (Even though I knew it was a dream.....*sigh*)2."Oh MY GOD THIS IS SOOO HOT!" XD It was a *really good* scene, you did a great job making it realistic. It was placed very well.(And it made me SOOOO happy! T_T Shawn and Uri smut!^_^) Though I felt SO bad for Uri afterwords, he was so embarrassed! But he stayed home with Shawn. ^_^. All Day.^_^. Your cliffhanger almost made me have a heart attack. 'Instead he lays me on his part...'
!_! Teeta, are you trying to KILL your reviewers with anticipation!!!??? I mean, what's going to happen? Will Shawn say something that reveals his love for Uri, and confuses Uri further?!

...okay I am ALRIGHT.*deep breath*

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for the smut!

Dee

Phew.. Now I've read through the 22 chapters in about two-three days.. Really nice story, with evil cliffhangers T_T Can't wait till the next time you update, even though I donno how I'm gonna get to know when you update, except if Trix tell me (she told me about this story). Your language is magnificent. You wrote things that I would've made so boring to read, but you managed to keep my attention :P
I love the thoughts to Uri, especially when he came with the sarcastic ones in this last chapter *claps* Makes it really interesting, and variate a lot. the daydream he had seem so real that I was like *jawdrop* when I got to know that it was just a dream..
Hope you continue writing, 'cause I'll be deffently reading whatever it is :)

hell~~

PS. Once again... evil cliffhanger T_T but it makes me wanna continue this story so badly..

omg omg omg that was hot, so kool and omg u said my name! *swoons* I was mentioned *bounces up and down*
Seriously tho i usually dont go for incest but this one is good, and I am really enjoying this story
U have heard it time and time again but I cant wait for the update :-) Your a good story writer :-)

haha, this chapter was the best! I am glad I choose to drink my morning coffee before I started to read this chapter! I was laughing here, my mom came to ask me what was so funny, lol, I had to make up some excuse.

Oh Teeta you're so good! Poor Uri! That would be so embarrasing. And now because of your evilness I probably be grinning madly the whole day and people will think that I've finally lost it. hehe.

oh and that microwave eggs part; it was brilliant! Shawn is such a blond in cooking! Though he did make good job with the breakfast,

If they are not surprised then I am surprised, lol.

-C-

OH MY GAWD!!!
OH MY FUCKING GAWD!!
*inarticulate gurgling and squeeling noises!!!*
i nearly had a heart attack at the start! i just..bloody hell... the...the... and the...
i cant think of anything coherant to write, my mind has just turned to goo over that chapter!!
so much good stuff!
...i think im goign to go re read this chapter :P
update update update!!
really soon!
like now.

holy crap!!! amazing chapter! at the begining i was like OMG yesssss!!! then it was all a fantasy! holy crap please update as soon as possible! i love this story with every fibre of my being!

Hahahaha, poor Uri - Though I love Uri torture! And ahhh, the same bed huh??? That ought to be interesting ^^

Chapter 22 - Oh my God! I took your advice. Because when I sat down to read your story I had a bowl of pasta salad and a glass of lemonade. LOL! And I would of DIED if I had read this chapter while eating. So, thank you! For saving my life! LOL! But oh my God! Naughty, naughty Shawn. With his stripping threats! And even naughtier Uri! Coming infront of your brother's face! Oh my. I couldn't be prouder.

“Uri, if you don’t come …”

I died laughing in that part. God, definently one of my favorite chapters!